deepundergroundpoetry.com

Dusk and my Broken Heart
Truth is
Blue sky and sunshine
They are bad for you
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
Blue sky and sunshine
They are bad for you
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
Author's Note
Musing on state of being ……
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 13
reading list entries 6
comments 30
reads 796
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 7:01pm
I used to hate dusk. And twilight as well.
Now it’s the beautiful precursor to
the best time, which is night time.
I’ll take an old country cemetery
buried in the thick trees.
That’s my solitude. My dusk.
It looks after my broken heart 🖤
I completely identify with this.
Xx
Now it’s the beautiful precursor to
the best time, which is night time.
I’ll take an old country cemetery
buried in the thick trees.
That’s my solitude. My dusk.
It looks after my broken heart 🖤
I completely identify with this.
Xx
0

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:05pm
We agree on a lot E
I get the solitude position
For me twilight and dusk hold reverence
Many thanks
Xxx
I get the solitude position
For me twilight and dusk hold reverence
Many thanks
Xxx
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
2nd Oct 2021 7:44pm
<< post removed >>

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:06pm
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 7:50pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:07pm
You're absolutely right Cisco
Good to have a pint in a paper bag there too for bonding...
Good to have a pint in a paper bag there too for bonding...
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:13pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:16pm
Not sure how I come up with those lines but glad you like them...
Many thanks for the read and comment
Many thanks for the read and comment
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:39pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 9:02pm
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 8:41pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 9:03pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
2nd Oct 2021 9:32pm
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 00:20am
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 00:23am
Like the comment NG
All my mood food groups
Having some fun with darker writes ..
👿
All my mood food groups
Having some fun with darker writes ..
👿
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 00:58am
You really brought the big city imagery in such an awesome way. Reminds me of London and I love the grey, the alleys, broken glass, and twilight. If I see stray cats it makes me sad though and I must feed them and try to save them. This is a HUGE LIKE and RL. Art is a perfect match.
0

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
I can see you feeding those stray cats, that's the kind of luxurious heart you have Kx. Maybe I should spend more time there, I might run into you ...
I love everything to do with Grey and my UK days as well. I'm a tried and true New Yorker but London is just as awesome in many ways.
Awesome comment
Thanks
I love everything to do with Grey and my UK days as well. I'm a tried and true New Yorker but London is just as awesome in many ways.
Awesome comment
Thanks
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 1:24am
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 2:02am
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 6:05am
I thought of T.S. Elliot talking to lampposts, loved it, the empty shelves are like potential of the new day, how do you come up with this stuff :)
0

Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 6:08am
It’s what happens when one entertains them self with fantasies of past days, at the expense of something real.
You’re a perceptive gem !
Such is life, and life goes on…🙏😇
You’re a perceptive gem !
Such is life, and life goes on…🙏😇
0

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
3rd Oct 2021 6:17pm
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
4th Oct 2021 4:10am
I love blue and sunshine but also dusk. There is a peaceful melancholy when the night falls.
0

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
4th Oct 2021 2:15pm
I wrote a poem way back about both.
I was just beginning to write. It's one of my favorite poems.
Thank you Summer
Twilight then Dusk
last rays of light
twilight then dusk
the day begins to sleep
quiet over the front
I was just beginning to write. It's one of my favorite poems.
Thank you Summer
Twilight then Dusk
last rays of light
twilight then dusk
the day begins to sleep
quiet over the front
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
Anonymous
7th Oct 2021 3:34am
Too much nice weather is bad for an artist.
The notorious degenerate Irish painter, Francis Bacon, used to remark he could never paint in Monte Carlo, despite the casinos & lax sex-laws were to his liking (underage boys)--the weather was much too nice. He could only paint in a dreary place like London...
Enjoyed!
The notorious degenerate Irish painter, Francis Bacon, used to remark he could never paint in Monte Carlo, despite the casinos & lax sex-laws were to his liking (underage boys)--the weather was much too nice. He could only paint in a dreary place like London...
Enjoyed!

0

Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
7th Oct 2021 10:21am
Yes, dreary weather is much better for am abstract painter ....
I love the sun but it doesn't love me and have been battling skin cancer issues for years..... Give me a dark corner and a bunch paint supplies and I'll make something pretty. I remember going to London once and finally getting the Beatles song where they sang " Sitting in an English garden waiting for the sun but the sun don't come" and then it all made sense when that little burst of sun did come. Everyone hurried outside to get an hour of sun and hope.
I'm probably more UK in theory then American but that's another story. My mom used to tease me that she got the wrong baby from the hospital and that I'm really Irish. Well I've got the fair skin and the lesions to prove it. Nonetheless thanks for your comment. Always good to see you !!!
I love the sun but it doesn't love me and have been battling skin cancer issues for years..... Give me a dark corner and a bunch paint supplies and I'll make something pretty. I remember going to London once and finally getting the Beatles song where they sang " Sitting in an English garden waiting for the sun but the sun don't come" and then it all made sense when that little burst of sun did come. Everyone hurried outside to get an hour of sun and hope.
I'm probably more UK in theory then American but that's another story. My mom used to tease me that she got the wrong baby from the hospital and that I'm really Irish. Well I've got the fair skin and the lesions to prove it. Nonetheless thanks for your comment. Always good to see you !!!
Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
16th Mar 2023 7:28pm
Re: Re. Dusk and my Broken Heart
16th Mar 2023 7:34pm
I got plenty more, just you wait and see.
I'm gonna cure you .....help you find your heart again. One poem at a time
I'm gonna cure you .....help you find your heart again. One poem at a time