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sudden conquest
i spotted her across the dance floor
the ways she looked and moved
i knew what was in store
she had a hypnotizing groove
her hair, sexy, long, and dark
she noticed me noticing her vibe
when our eyes met there was a spark
something that i couldn’t describe
this could be a new milestone
being a great marksman, i don’t miss
i believe i can set the tone
to land a good night kiss
the ways she looked and moved
i knew what was in store
she had a hypnotizing groove
her hair, sexy, long, and dark
she noticed me noticing her vibe
when our eyes met there was a spark
something that i couldn’t describe
this could be a new milestone
being a great marksman, i don’t miss
i believe i can set the tone
to land a good night kiss
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09.27.2021
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Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 5:31am
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Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 5:47am
I am feeling the ambience of your beautiful musing my poet.. ahh.. that take a chance on fate.. hopefully, it will always sway in your favor..
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8th Oct 2021 7:31pm
Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 5:53am
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8th Oct 2021 8:02pm
Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 6:50am
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8th Oct 2021 8:03pm
Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 9:58am
Where have you been son ?
Missed you around these parts
You and that babe, that's magic.....
Capture
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Missed you around these parts
You and that babe, that's magic.....
Capture
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. sudden conquest
8th Oct 2021 8:14pm
PS what can I say? School, work, family, and this Amazonian babe. I appreciate the message.
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2nd Oct 2021 1:22pm
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8th Oct 2021 8:15pm
Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 7:14pm
I see PoetSpeak beat to asking, “where ya been”?
This is a spicy little slice.
When eyes lock, sometimes ya just know.
This is a spicy little slice.
When eyes lock, sometimes ya just know.
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8th Oct 2021 8:19pm
Re. sudden conquest
2nd Oct 2021 7:48pm
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8th Oct 2021 8:20pm
Re. sudden conquest
3rd Oct 2021 6:45pm
It's been a minute since I've seen you around, pretty cool to see you back writing about your love interest. I hope the night ended as planned.
LJ
LJ
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8th Oct 2021 8:26pm
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
9th Nov 2021 10:22pm
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12th Nov 2021 3:57am