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You belong to Me
You belong to Me,
said earth to water
You yearn to kiss the sky;
ready to lose your identity for her
But does she even
care for you
even though you wear her
shades of blue?
The stars adorn her
like glitters on her face
and the moon woos her
with his silvery serenade
She is the queen of the cosmos
beyond your reach
but I'm the warmth that you seek;
pressing you onto my bosom
far and deep.
The sun and the wind conspire
to take you away from me,
promising you the ether-
the goddess of infinity
Like a vagabond you will wander
to feel her silky serenity,
only to soon dissipate
in her vanity..
and...eventually
you will...
fall for me
cos I am meant for you
and...You...belong to Me,
said earth to water...
said earth to water
You yearn to kiss the sky;
ready to lose your identity for her
But does she even
care for you
even though you wear her
shades of blue?
The stars adorn her
like glitters on her face
and the moon woos her
with his silvery serenade
She is the queen of the cosmos
beyond your reach
but I'm the warmth that you seek;
pressing you onto my bosom
far and deep.
The sun and the wind conspire
to take you away from me,
promising you the ether-
the goddess of infinity
Like a vagabond you will wander
to feel her silky serenity,
only to soon dissipate
in her vanity..
and...eventually
you will...
fall for me
cos I am meant for you
and...You...belong to Me,
said earth to water...
Author's Note
This poem was originally posted on my other account on DUP.... After adding few verses and tweaking it a bit here n there, I have posted it on this profile.... Subsequently it has been deleted from my other account.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 11:22am
This is absolutely beautiful, I adore this piece its wonderful
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 7:27pm
Hey dearest, thank you so much for such bestowing on this poem such lovely words of appreciation😊... I very much appreciate your kind support, dear Ron 🙏🌹🌹🌹
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 11:45am
There is not much to say but Awesome Write. I'd always thought it was the water hugging the earth but you may be right.
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Thanks a lot, dear poet for stopping by...
Your wonderful review and the RL add has made my evening.... Much thanks 😊🌹
Your wonderful review and the RL add has made my evening.... Much thanks 😊🌹
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 12:29pm
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21st Sep 2021 7:31pm
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 12:35pm
Beautiful words.....I am really feeling this right now (literally) An excellent read for me @ 7:34 am #shegotmegoingincircles
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 7:35pm
and your comments have me over the moon now😊😊😊... So glad to know this poem has impressed you so much....
Thanks a bunch for the wonderful comments and the reading list add 🌷🌷🌷
Thanks a bunch for the wonderful comments and the reading list add 🌷🌷🌷
Re: Re. You belong to Me
....and If you get time read these (my thoughts b4 ever reading this poem.) Very Ironic parallels
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/429875-epilogue-i-love-you/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/430124-shout-it-out-it-seems-to-hang-on/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/430354-past-the-point-of-a-care-cause-i-love/
My trilogy before making a break from this topic 😊
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/429875-epilogue-i-love-you/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/430124-shout-it-out-it-seems-to-hang-on/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/430354-past-the-point-of-a-care-cause-i-love/
My trilogy before making a break from this topic 😊
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 7:59pm
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 1:02pm
Wow, your poetry is very beautiful and deep. Thank you for this gem of a write 😁
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 7:36pm
Oh, thank you so much, dear friend.... Your kind words mean a lot to me.... Much thanks for your constant support 😊🌹🌹🌹
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21st Sep 2021 2:25pm
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21st Sep 2021 7:37pm
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 3:43pm
beautiful the lessons...
beautiful the words...
mind gripping
thank you for sharing
beautiful the words...
mind gripping
thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 7:39pm
Love your poetic response, dear MS🌹
So glad you dropped by... I'm very much honoured by the beautiful review n the reading list add🙏😊
So glad you dropped by... I'm very much honoured by the beautiful review n the reading list add🙏😊
Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 8:29pm
Re: Re. You belong to Me
21st Sep 2021 8:31pm
Thank you, dear Francisco for the read and the nice comment 🌷 love seeing you on my page😊
Re. You belong to Me
22nd Sep 2021 1:56am
Re: Re. You belong to Me
22nd Sep 2021 8:05am
It makes me immense happy to know that a great poet like you enjoyed my work...i feel honoured,dear Joe 🌹🌹🌹I have been a fan of your poetry for a long time...I used to follow your work through my previous account called MysticalRose 😊
Re. You belong to Me
22nd Sep 2021 12:10pm
Re: Re. You belong to Me
22nd Sep 2021 12:12pm
Thank you, dear poet... 🌹
I'm so grateful and thankful to you for your kind support.... 😊🌷
I'm so grateful and thankful to you for your kind support.... 😊🌷
Re: Re. You belong to Me
22nd Sep 2021 5:44pm
Thank you, dear poet for taking the time to read my piece... Very much grateful for the gracious comment and the RL add😊🌹🌹🌹
Re. You belong to Me
23rd Sep 2021 10:17am
Very beautiful poem. This gave me a beautiful illustration of this earth we live in.
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Thank you, dear poet. 🌷
I very much appreciate you stopping by and gracing my page with your gracious comments. Very much honoured by the RL add. 😊🌹
I very much appreciate you stopping by and gracing my page with your gracious comments. Very much honoured by the RL add. 😊🌹
Re. You belong to Me
23rd Sep 2021 3:05pm
The everlasting love of that will stand the test of time.
One can't live without the other.
We all need harmony in these two heavenly gifts for all of life to exist and flourish.
One can't live without the other.
We all need harmony in these two heavenly gifts for all of life to exist and flourish.
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
23rd Sep 2021 7:17pm
You are right, dear poet.... Thank you so much for sharing your insightful thoughts 🌷
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23rd Sep 2021 3:05pm
Re: Re. You belong to Me
23rd Sep 2021 7:20pm
Thank you 😊 I very much appreciate you for taking the time to read and comment and would also like to thank you for the generous reading list add 😊🌹
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
23rd Sep 2021 7:22pm
Thanks, dear poet for visiting my page and leaving a great review 😊🌹
And Welcome to DUP🌷
And Welcome to DUP🌷
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12th Oct 2021 2:28am
Re: Re. You belong to Me
15th Oct 2021 8:31am
Thank you so much, dear poetess for your gracious comment... I'm truly honoured by the RL add 🌹 Your visit is highly appreciated😊
Re. You belong to Me
17th Oct 2021 9:09pm
This is a beautiful masterpiece of poetry by a lovely and talented lady. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, }O{
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
18th Oct 2021 5:54pm
YOU deserve them and more if only I had the talent to express them. Hugs, (O)
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Re. You belong to Me
15th Nov 2021 11:49am
Fantastic write ... how did I miss it ... nice job with enhancing this ... so adore your writes ...
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Re. You belong to Me
15th Dec 2021 5:34pm
This gorgeous write reminded my of the joy of reading about Greek and Roman mythology just before the teens years. In a way that might be considered odd, it also makes me think of Sting's "Send Your Love".
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Re. You belong to Me
5th Jan 2022 6:57pm
Re: Re. You belong to Me
5th Jan 2022 7:07pm
Wow... Thank you for your kind words, dear poet🌹😊 Very much appreciate your visit 🌷
Re. You belong to Me
1st Feb 2022 1:24am
This poem is great aspiration and a cosmic union of two powers. The water may go up in the sky ultimately it comes back to earth. Same is the love that comes back to its gravity. Beautifully written.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
28th Mar 2022 7:25pm
Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts on this poem..... Yes.. Love does come back to it's gravity...
Thank you once again, dear poet 🌹🌹🌹
Thank you once again, dear poet 🌹🌹🌹
Re. You belong to Me
Ya know?
Something kept drawing me here … I never knew what it was, but now, I know why.
There are very few poems I can recall that ever touched deep enough to made me sigh; yet, the sheer magic of how you've brought written words to life and awoken such wonders of imagination my world disappeared for awhile, sweeping my being into a beautiful realm of ethereally spiritual alchemy.
I've read and admired many impressive poetical works, and never wished I'd written someone else's, until now.
You've composed the most enchanting love poem I've ever read, literally or metaphorically.
Stunned and enthralled … thank you ever-so warmly and sincerely, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard🖌
[Footnote: I'm surprised my review lacked enough in quality to receive your response.]
Something kept drawing me here … I never knew what it was, but now, I know why.
There are very few poems I can recall that ever touched deep enough to made me sigh; yet, the sheer magic of how you've brought written words to life and awoken such wonders of imagination my world disappeared for awhile, sweeping my being into a beautiful realm of ethereally spiritual alchemy.
I've read and admired many impressive poetical works, and never wished I'd written someone else's, until now.
You've composed the most enchanting love poem I've ever read, literally or metaphorically.
Stunned and enthralled … thank you ever-so warmly and sincerely, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard🖌
[Footnote: I'm surprised my review lacked enough in quality to receive your response.]
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
11th May 2022 6:04pm
I'm so sorry that i didn't reply to your so generous n encouraging words of appreciation... To be honest, when I read your review I was so blown away... I can't express in words how your review has touched me.... I'm someone who is not that eloquent when it comes to leaving comments on other's work... And when I receive such feedback (such as yours which is rare for me), I really need time to let it sink in... And find words to express my gratitude... Yes, my mistake, I should have at least thanked you if I couldn't express my feelings and sense of gratitude that your words evoked...
It was very kind of you to invest your precious time in reading and writing this review for my poem... I'm extremely sorry
Please accept my apologies 🌷
It was very kind of you to invest your precious time in reading and writing this review for my poem... I'm extremely sorry
Please accept my apologies 🌷
Re: Re. You belong to Me
19th May 2022 3:12pm
It's quite alright, M'Lady 🥂
I should have known you had a good reason, and not put you in the position of apologizing … this is the farthest from my intent, but I am truly humbled by your thoughtfully caring response.
Please, know my reviews come from the heart, and every word is honest, sincere, and filled with respect and admiration.
Your poem touched me deeply, and I wanted you to know how much and in what ways.
Though, your apology is wholeheartedly accepted, I just wanted to let you know I value your response and how my own words might made You feel … rewarded, appreciated, respected, admired, and so very highly enjoyed.
Bless your sweet heart for sharing your thoughts and feelings with me.
With warmest hugs 'n love! ⁓ Richard🖌
I should have known you had a good reason, and not put you in the position of apologizing … this is the farthest from my intent, but I am truly humbled by your thoughtfully caring response.
Please, know my reviews come from the heart, and every word is honest, sincere, and filled with respect and admiration.
Your poem touched me deeply, and I wanted you to know how much and in what ways.
Though, your apology is wholeheartedly accepted, I just wanted to let you know I value your response and how my own words might made You feel … rewarded, appreciated, respected, admired, and so very highly enjoyed.
Bless your sweet heart for sharing your thoughts and feelings with me.
With warmest hugs 'n love! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
20th May 2022 6:17pm
Thanks a, lot, dear poet! 😊 That is so sweet of you 🌹 You are not only a fantastic poet but a beautiful soul too... I'm glad our paths have crossed 😊
And I know that your reviews are honest, meaningful n straight from your heart... And the recipient of your review is indeed very lucky...
Thanks once again 😊🌹
And I know that your reviews are honest, meaningful n straight from your heart... And the recipient of your review is indeed very lucky...
Thanks once again 😊🌹
Re. You belong to Me
26th Feb 2022 5:48pm
OMG! How beautiful and breathtaking. I love your poetry. Hugs and peace, xoxo (O)
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Re. You belong to Me
28th Mar 2022 2:11am
This is so breathtaking. I keep reading it. Excellent read. Thank you for writing it.
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
28th Mar 2022 7:23pm
Thanks a lot... Much grateful to you for your generous review. I'm so glad you like this piece 😊🌹😊
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16th Apr 2022 6:27am
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Re. You belong to Me
25th Jul 2022 10:45pm
I just discovered this, and am so glad I did. Really beautiful. I'll read it again, many times I'm sure.
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Re: Re. You belong to Me
26th Jul 2022 8:28am
Thanks a lot, dear Ellie...😊 I'm so touched n floored as well by your kind n sweet review. Much thanks❤
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