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Zero_Stillness
In her eye
is
a heart shaped spiral,
Spiraling,
Seeing
into
the scenery of me,
Capturing,
Elements
in
moments
-
Laments
in
silence:
She paints
my
heart
in
Her
Art,
Textured
mid
night
With
Shades
of
cool,
So cool.
Published 19th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
19th Sep 2021 11:25am
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20th Sep 2021 11:33am
From your fingertips to my soul.
I am grateful to interact with one who sees so deeply into things R.
My deepest gratitude.
Blessings.
I am grateful to interact with one who sees so deeply into things R.
My deepest gratitude.
Blessings.
19th Sep 2021 12:16pm
20th Sep 2021 11:34am
19th Sep 2021 6:29pm
Really powerful. I could feel the stillness and a pull from the page.
Kinda hypnotic for me to read.
Kinda hypnotic for me to read.
20th Sep 2021 11:34am
20th Sep 2021 4:10am
I really enjoyed the energy of this, cipher. The brevity contributed so much to the emotional input, which is very palpable, btw. Sincerity lingers between the lines.
20th Sep 2021 11:35am
Most wonderful perspective that is inspires my deepest gratitude.
Thank you A.
Thank you A.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
6th Oct 2021 3:05pm
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6th Oct 2021 4:43pm
If I may...
What I will say is:
Do not compare yourself to others. What you are is a marvel, a wonder, a treasure, beyond all others and beyond measure.
How you feel and think is perfectly justified, in all circumstances.
... I think perhaps a writer must write with blinders on, perhaps.
but with that being said... I would of course miss your presence in any capacity and I encourage most fervently to keep writing...
Send the language to all places in space and time.
What I will say is:
Do not compare yourself to others. What you are is a marvel, a wonder, a treasure, beyond all others and beyond measure.
How you feel and think is perfectly justified, in all circumstances.
... I think perhaps a writer must write with blinders on, perhaps.
but with that being said... I would of course miss your presence in any capacity and I encourage most fervently to keep writing...
Send the language to all places in space and time.
