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Note to self (16)
I am on the other side
Of the hill.
No way but down.
No tears.
Choices were made.
Face reality
So you blew it.
Worst,
You failed
To make your
Parents
Proud.
Of the hill.
No way but down.
No tears.
Choices were made.
Face reality
So you blew it.
Worst,
You failed
To make your
Parents
Proud.
Published 19th Sep 2021
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19th Sep 2021 4:23am
19th Sep 2021 4:41am
Why? Rather of a lazy bugger with zero talent anyway....never mind if I did try on occasions.....
19th Sep 2021 10:49am
19th Sep 2021 1:44pm
Always had problems with that. I speak French of course and I also learned passable German....''tourist stuff''. But of that I am rather proud. Of course reading German is a lot easier than speaking it. Same with Italian. I love to read stuff in Italian. So I suppose I am not entirely zero.......
17th Oct 2021 11:08pm
It's a reflective write where we sometimes carry the guilt and refuse to unload the burden for whatever has happened in the long, long past. It's hard to forgive oneself and move on, or at least make peace since the past cannot be changed. It's a relatable write in the sense that many of us wanted to live up to our parent's expectations.
Powerful write.
Powerful write.
17th Oct 2021 11:20pm
