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Still Just You
You could stand guard
cross your arms
turn your cheek
and I'd still look your way
I cannot help this
I'm still into you
cross your arms
turn your cheek
and I'd still look your way
I cannot help this
I'm still into you
Published 15th Sep 2021
Author's Note
I know this is short, but I really just wanted to publish this. Sorry for my lack of activity these past couple months. I am back now though.
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15th Sep 2021 1:39pm
Dear S,
This poem is so direct I really like it. The power of human attraction, I guess like any other animal, is so powerful. You’ve captured this so wonderfully in such brevity. H🌷
This poem is so direct I really like it. The power of human attraction, I guess like any other animal, is so powerful. You’ve captured this so wonderfully in such brevity. H🌷
15th Sep 2021 8:57pm
I love the brevity and the crisp, concise point, made.... It's potent and so deeply emotional....
It's what good poetry should be.... Captivating!
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
It's what good poetry should be.... Captivating!
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
