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Other Side of The Rainbow
Is there a pot of gold on the other side
After enduring our storms along this ride
Will we hang glide with angelic wings
In paradise, where everyday is Spring
Seeing is believing so only time will tell
Sooner or later it'll be clearly revealed
Will we all be healed of mortal afflictions
And rehabbed from our sinful addictions
Receiving final prescription on judgement day
Able to stay in glory or abhorrently cast away
Or will we replay the game in a different form
As energy dissipates & generates a new norm
After enduring our storms along this ride
Will we hang glide with angelic wings
In paradise, where everyday is Spring
Seeing is believing so only time will tell
Sooner or later it'll be clearly revealed
Will we all be healed of mortal afflictions
And rehabbed from our sinful addictions
Receiving final prescription on judgement day
Able to stay in glory or abhorrently cast away
Or will we replay the game in a different form
As energy dissipates & generates a new norm
Published 14th Sep 2021
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15th Sep 2021 2:32pm
Awesome. This piece reminded me of the Wizard of Oz, a creation that contains Truths from both Eastern and Western paradigms.
... I think that such ideas/thoughts can be like meditative devices to expand consciousness, in order to make that which cannot be seen, into something that begins to materialize, in its way.
Like information from the abyss, perhaps.
... Very nicely done.
... I think that such ideas/thoughts can be like meditative devices to expand consciousness, in order to make that which cannot be seen, into something that begins to materialize, in its way.
Like information from the abyss, perhaps.
... Very nicely done.
17th Sep 2021 3:21am
Oh this is beautifully composed my King.
A musing to allow our intellects to escape for a fleeting minute, whereas we can taste the misplaced time of peace a sense of belonging through the passage of rebirth; to be given an ordained second deliverance in life right the wrong of our journey, be that testimony to love, nonjudgement in the eyes of others and just maybe if spiritually atone to the originality of ourselves we would have gained that imperial insight, within our temple we are at peace, therefore, mundane atrocities will be less marginalized, because you were at one with that unnamed time, serenity with the dust of earth that spiritual energy, which cannot be seen or explained with the naked eyes, only that light embracingly truly felt...
Your musings are moving in the direction of a heightened awareness, whereas, you will be seeking more questions, the answers will be revealed to you in the most cognitive manner.. wisdom and knowledge will become like an earthly parable in everything you say, do, feel..
That is indeed the other side of the rainbow as you have stated above..
A musing to allow our intellects to escape for a fleeting minute, whereas we can taste the misplaced time of peace a sense of belonging through the passage of rebirth; to be given an ordained second deliverance in life right the wrong of our journey, be that testimony to love, nonjudgement in the eyes of others and just maybe if spiritually atone to the originality of ourselves we would have gained that imperial insight, within our temple we are at peace, therefore, mundane atrocities will be less marginalized, because you were at one with that unnamed time, serenity with the dust of earth that spiritual energy, which cannot be seen or explained with the naked eyes, only that light embracingly truly felt...
Your musings are moving in the direction of a heightened awareness, whereas, you will be seeking more questions, the answers will be revealed to you in the most cognitive manner.. wisdom and knowledge will become like an earthly parable in everything you say, do, feel..
That is indeed the other side of the rainbow as you have stated above..
15th Oct 2021 1:10am
Those opening lines are great wordplay and metaphor. I think in due time, we all find gold, regardless of how big the pot may be.
Excellent stuff.
Excellent stuff.
