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Their Long Distance Cadence
sounds of a.... heartbeat....
felt thousands of miles away
between two lovers
Published 12th Sep 2021
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12th Sep 2021 10:11am
12th Sep 2021 12:28pm
I really like the title of this one. It’s a very resonant and original description of feelings in a relationship.
12th Sep 2021 12:57pm
Such perfect aching and clever use of all 17 syllables, C..... Hit the ball outta the park with the title!!
Impressive work, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Impressive work, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
12th Sep 2021 7:39pm
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2021 7:00pm
Hey Asper…….powerful few words……..no matter the distance…….souls still connect…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
