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Inferno
The anger is welcomed
when I can not feel
One foot in front
of the other
Feel my blood boil
A spark of light
Transforming
my eyes
I am an inferno
blazing my own path
I will not apologize
walking over ash
Your smiles didn't work
The politeness
Overlooked
Take away your comfort
Your lies didn't work
I will burn you down
Be sure to watch
your step when I
am on on fire.
Carless
Brutal
Reckless
You see my inferno
cannot be undone
When you hear my
flames crack
you should run
One foot in
front of the other
Away from me
Cause I'm an inferno
blazing my own path
I will not apologize
walking over ash
when I can not feel
One foot in front
of the other
Feel my blood boil
A spark of light
Transforming
my eyes
I am an inferno
blazing my own path
I will not apologize
walking over ash
Your smiles didn't work
The politeness
Overlooked
Take away your comfort
Your lies didn't work
I will burn you down
Be sure to watch
your step when I
am on on fire.
Carless
Brutal
Reckless
You see my inferno
cannot be undone
When you hear my
flames crack
you should run
One foot in
front of the other
Away from me
Cause I'm an inferno
blazing my own path
I will not apologize
walking over ash
Published 10th Sep 2021
Author's Note
I was pissed when I wrote this. One of my very first poems
The temptation to edit was killing me. But I held back.
Nice to read something uncomplicated.
The temptation to edit was killing me. But I held back.
Nice to read something uncomplicated.
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2021 7:01am
I was listening to a psychologist talking about rage. How it's a response to a threat to the well-being, if not the very existence of the subject.
Elements I like: the rage is welcome; walking over ash; the sound of cracking; advancing fire.
What is the future of fire?
Elements I like: the rage is welcome; walking over ash; the sound of cracking; advancing fire.
What is the future of fire?
10th Sep 2021 1:19pm
That you need to burn it down first.
New growth comes afterwards.
Almost like a cleansing.
New growth comes afterwards.
Almost like a cleansing.
It's a scorcher! Reads even better second time round! Again, songwriting potential on display here or simply read as a stand-alone rant, screaming at the top of your lungs!
10th Sep 2021 11:20pm
10th Sep 2021 11:23pm
Yeah with me it's Status Quo who were UK headbangers in their younger days, lol.
Has anyone said yet, "Adelphina's on fire with her latest offering!" Lol.
Has anyone said yet, "Adelphina's on fire with her latest offering!" Lol.
10th Sep 2021 11:30pm
Ha!!
Not yet. You are the first.
I need to check out Status Quo.
Thanks for the music lead.
Not yet. You are the first.
I need to check out Status Quo.
Thanks for the music lead.
You won't be disappointed. If you like to shake your head violently from time to time, they are the band for you, ok? They sound better after a few drinks also. I don't know why, they just do!
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
10th Sep 2021 11:41pm
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10th Sep 2021 11:44pm
14th Sep 2021 4:10am
I like this one as well. Very solid and stylish vent piece! As always, love the word choice.
Well crap,
I just now read your comment.
Thank you!!!
Words are a choice so choose wisely. LOL
or the spiderman slogan
with great words comes
great responsibility
Hahaha
Later gator!
I just now read your comment.
Thank you!!!
Words are a choice so choose wisely. LOL
or the spiderman slogan
with great words comes
great responsibility
Hahaha
Later gator!
23rd Sep 2021 3:08pm
Channeling your inner Metallica... I love that. :p Metallica is amazing like you. I will definitely remember to NEVER get you mad at me. That's some fierce writing... Brilliant as usual. :)
You are too lovely to ever be mad at beautiful sultry KristinaX.
You are one of the bravest people I have met on this site!!
You are an inferno.
Thank You as always!!
You are one of the bravest people I have met on this site!!
You are an inferno.
Thank You as always!!
