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I Am A Sadist
it makes me
feel
somewhat
strange
to read the few letters
that make up the title of this poem
the ethical baggage
they carry is so heavy
that they seem
carved in large letters on stone
in this secret diary
in the public domain
black words
irrevocably engraved
on
a smooth wall of white rock
heavy
and inexorable
(C)2021 Raibeart Bruis
feel
somewhat
strange
to read the few letters
that make up the title of this poem
the ethical baggage
they carry is so heavy
that they seem
carved in large letters on stone
in this secret diary
in the public domain
black words
irrevocably engraved
on
a smooth wall of white rock
heavy
and inexorable
(C)2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 10th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Idea borrowed from a bdsm website.
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10th Sep 2021 4:19am
14th Sep 2021 5:05am
Anonymous
10th Sep 2021 4:25am
last 10 lines--great ending image, irony; a like!
14th Sep 2021 5:05am
10th Sep 2021 2:43pm
I feel like it's a sort of cementing yourself (in an acceptance) and your own particular desires /needs upon the starkness of the words upon the cyber page....
Truth can be so terrifically freeing and simultaneously terrifying....
Outstanding ink, KP
You always take my breath away
🌹 - B
Truth can be so terrifically freeing and simultaneously terrifying....
Outstanding ink, KP
You always take my breath away
🌹 - B
14th Sep 2021 5:07am
(does this count as breath play? did you consent...?)
Yes terrifying and liberating.
Thank you.
❣️🙏🏼
Yes terrifying and liberating.
Thank you.
❣️🙏🏼
10th Sep 2021 7:53pm
