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Invitational Praise
Invitational Praise
My,
You
Certainly
Fit the bill.
Cold
Is hot.
Less
Is actually more.
Thoughts
At first blush
Tend
To continue
At each
Invitation.
Life
Role plays itself.
Say what
It takes,
And get
What you want.
Wear
What you limit;
I'll be
Waiting.
My,
You
Certainly
Fit the bill.
Cold
Is hot.
Less
Is actually more.
Thoughts
At first blush
Tend
To continue
At each
Invitation.
Life
Role plays itself.
Say what
It takes,
And get
What you want.
Wear
What you limit;
I'll be
Waiting.
Published 8th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 1:15am
Nice rhythms; the line breaks and stanzas tend to work well, to good, unified effect.
Nice lines; "Life role plays itself" & 1st 6 lines....rhythm well-disguised, but unfolding upon familiarity to a more muscular, solid build.
Enjoyed!
Nice lines; "Life role plays itself" & 1st 6 lines....rhythm well-disguised, but unfolding upon familiarity to a more muscular, solid build.
Enjoyed!
8th Sep 2021 2:20am
