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Raw
rawness of possessions
palms pressed hard
limbs entangled crossed
lips sealed and locked.
pleasures and fantasies
stories of night after mingling breaths
sweats and sheets
soaked in demons lust.
invisible and tangible.
thorn pricks floodgates
creating jolts of quakes
night after nights.
ssssshhhhhh hissing serpent.
palms pressed hard
limbs entangled crossed
lips sealed and locked.
pleasures and fantasies
stories of night after mingling breaths
sweats and sheets
soaked in demons lust.
invisible and tangible.
thorn pricks floodgates
creating jolts of quakes
night after nights.
ssssshhhhhh hissing serpent.
Published 7th Sep 2021
| Edited 8th Sep 2021
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8th Sep 2021 00:10am
A beautiful raw, carnal, and visceral rendering of unbridled passion. Oh how these 'sins' excite the serpent and we must listen... ;)
8th Sep 2021 8:30am
12th Sep 2021 4:53am
"rawness of possessions
palms pressed hard "
~this is *all beautiful..
ur first stanza opens strong n inticing.. each thereafter builds in heated visions n im callin it lovely..
id add a disclaimer of-- to be read in soft hush ;)
~d
palms pressed hard "
~this is *all beautiful..
ur first stanza opens strong n inticing.. each thereafter builds in heated visions n im callin it lovely..
id add a disclaimer of-- to be read in soft hush ;)
~d
12th Sep 2021 11:53am
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2nd Dec 2022 4:13am
aahhh amazing erotica!!!
