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Prêt à déshabiller
Lace, peach camisole
Orbs of Venus nest therein
Ecstasy's portent
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 5th Sep 2021
| Edited 7th Sep 2021
Author's Note
A stunning model was my muse.
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Re. Prêt à retirer
The phrasing of this reminds me so much of one of my most favourite poems ever, Woman by Charles Bukowski. Pretty sure it’s the peach line. Peach is such a gorgeous word.
(https://www.poeticous.com/charles-bukowski/woman)
You can’t seem to escape from the audible clutch of peach camisole, and paired with the “preparing to withdraw” French term I found to be incredibly beautiful in a very sensual way.
This is the kind of erotica I can get behind. Classier than colonel classy of classy town.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
(https://www.poeticous.com/charles-bukowski/woman)
You can’t seem to escape from the audible clutch of peach camisole, and paired with the “preparing to withdraw” French term I found to be incredibly beautiful in a very sensual way.
This is the kind of erotica I can get behind. Classier than colonel classy of classy town.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. Prêt à retirer
Dear, Missy
I am humbled by your comment regarding any resemblance to the work of a great poet as Charles Bukowski.
I love your comment about "peach camisole" as I eat a peach for breakfast 😊 Regarding the title I was going for the opposite of prêt à porter which I used incorrectly, kinda...I corredcted it. My initial one said ready to remove...kinda same dif.
I am extremely pleased that you liked this piece, Missy
Cheers!
I am humbled by your comment regarding any resemblance to the work of a great poet as Charles Bukowski.
I love your comment about "peach camisole" as I eat a peach for breakfast 😊 Regarding the title I was going for the opposite of prêt à porter which I used incorrectly, kinda...I corredcted it. My initial one said ready to remove...kinda same dif.
I am extremely pleased that you liked this piece, Missy
Cheers!
Re. Prêt à retirer
6th Sep 2021 00:34am
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16th Sep 2021 12:15pm
Thank yo so much, Faith❣ I am super pleased that the piece in some way touched you.
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Re: Re. Prêt à retirer
16th Sep 2021 12:17pm
Thank you, Lady Scarlett❣ Your words mean so much to me because I always endeavor to keep it classy. I am glad the you enjoyed the piece.
Re. Prêt à retirer
6th Sep 2021 4:44am
Dear GW,
Stop. You’re embarrassing me! I did that photo shoot as a favor…hehe just kidding. I echo the above comments in their praise of this lovely write. It’s eloquent and classy in its admiration. Well done. H🌷
Stop. You’re embarrassing me! I did that photo shoot as a favor…hehe just kidding. I echo the above comments in their praise of this lovely write. It’s eloquent and classy in its admiration. Well done. H🌷
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Haha❣❣ Thank you, dear Honoria. I do apologize for not getting your permission to use your image in my poem it was just so right 😜😁 I appreciate each and every comment you leave for me..l.they inspire me no end. And I am spewr jazzed that you enjoyed this piece.
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6th Sep 2021 12:59pm
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16th Sep 2021 12:23pm
Re. Prêt à déshabiller
Your senryú is sizzling of high class sizzle.... My dearest BB... portent, he says.... Ohhh My.... I must dress for such a regal affair... 👗.... *wink*....
Your high brow classiness and yummy large vocabulary.... Well, it's just fuel for my sapiosexual fire 🔥
Terrifically penned, per usual BB style!!!
💋 - 🌹
💙
-Blue
Your high brow classiness and yummy large vocabulary.... Well, it's just fuel for my sapiosexual fire 🔥
Terrifically penned, per usual BB style!!!
💋 - 🌹
💙
-Blue
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12th Sep 2021 00:39am
Mmmmm❣ Super delicious comment, my lovely BB. Yes. You must wear the little black dress and pearls to match our sapiosexuality😍
Re. Prêt à déshabiller
13th Sep 2021 2:46am
That translated to 'Ready to Undress' for me. So super sexy out the gate. :p But it only got better from there. You have a beautiful way with words my Dearest GW. I have to admit that last line really got my mind thinking of all that exquisite intimacy to follow... waiting for the next one that follow's on from here. (do it for me ;) )
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16th Sep 2021 12:35pm
Dearest, Kristina, Thank you so much❣❣ Tu as raison regarding the title and I'm glad that was the gateway to titillation. I first titled it ready to remove but felt that ready to undress was the better oppopsite for ready-to-wear. I appreciate immensley your words regarding my way with words, It's beautiful recognition of my love affair weith them.
Hmmmm a followup poem. How can I resist that challenge?
Hmmmm a followup poem. How can I resist that challenge?