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Obsession
For as long as I can remember,
This has been my fascination:
Water! Lakes, pools, rivers, sea.
If it's wet, I'll swim there.
Winding moorland stream?
Cold Highland Loch?
No problem!
I'll jump
In.
This has been my fascination:
Water! Lakes, pools, rivers, sea.
If it's wet, I'll swim there.
Winding moorland stream?
Cold Highland Loch?
No problem!
I'll jump
In.
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2nd Sep 2021 4:05am
Bloody brave if you jump in lochs
found the flow excellent
really enjoyed
found the flow excellent
really enjoyed
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2nd Sep 2021 9:32am
I love the water too ... used to live a mile from the Chesapeake Bay ... now I am four hours from the Gulf of Mexico ... miss the ocean ... plan to go back next month ... thanks for sharing this reminder of the water I love ...
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2nd Sep 2021 12:56pm
no better obsession than water.
the power of water and how it draws us in.
thank you for sharing your fascination.
the power of water and how it draws us in.
thank you for sharing your fascination.
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2nd Sep 2021 3:37pm
As a water baby I can fully appreciate this. Home is in the depths ( for me ).
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 10:55pm
I stumbled on this one by chance and it's awesome, I love the way you broke down each body of water. I'm not really a water baby lol. But heart to heart this is s lovely piece:)

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Water babe! Having myself experimented with wild water, ('showered' in a rainstorm as well as skinny dipped in sea at Wales) I can relate to this exultant piece. If confident of your health and immunity it's worth trying.
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17th Sep 2021 3:43pm
I am able bodied in the water, and not overly mobile out of it! I think that's part of the appeal.
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13th Jul 2022 5:24pm
There is something liberating going for a swim and immersing yourself in the water. And nothing beats a cool dip on a hot humid day.
Although, I do admit, in the ocean and in lakes, in the back of my mind I wonder what may be lurking and watching me.
Ellie, I hope you live near the water or have access to a body of water. Have a great summer.
Although, I do admit, in the ocean and in lakes, in the back of my mind I wonder what may be lurking and watching me.
Ellie, I hope you live near the water or have access to a body of water. Have a great summer.
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13th Jul 2022 5:27pm
We have various pools nearby, and are about 45 minutes away from the sea. :)