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Poems are wine that rhyme
words smashed
running down the page
over ripe fruit
juices overflowing
smeared into images
sticky sweet
or tart and bitter
words with seeds
growing new meaning
fermenting ideas in rhyme
like rare red wine
an elixir for the heart
inebriating our spirits
drunk on the rhythm of life
poems are wine
that rhyme
running down the page
over ripe fruit
juices overflowing
smeared into images
sticky sweet
or tart and bitter
words with seeds
growing new meaning
fermenting ideas in rhyme
like rare red wine
an elixir for the heart
inebriating our spirits
drunk on the rhythm of life
poems are wine
that rhyme
Published 31st Aug 2021
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Poetry intoxicates by opening our souls. The rhyme and rhythm are always there, seeing the patterns from the corner of my eye but invisible when I turn my head to look. *wink* yourself sorceress. Peace, love, mirth, and moaning, Richard
1st Sep 2021 11:14am
I think there are deep, philosophical observations, to be seen in everything.
Along with this, I think there are many applications of each, philosophical observation.
I like how you establish the immediacy of an idea, as it pertains to poetry, being like a ripe fruit, bursting with the colors that demand to be placed upon the canvas.
... and then take the analogy further by expanding into deeper components, with the seeds, which adds to the symbolism as well as the movement of the write.
and then the shift from analogy to simile.. into a most rewarding, quasi circular conclusion.
Totally cool.
Along with this, I think there are many applications of each, philosophical observation.
I like how you establish the immediacy of an idea, as it pertains to poetry, being like a ripe fruit, bursting with the colors that demand to be placed upon the canvas.
... and then take the analogy further by expanding into deeper components, with the seeds, which adds to the symbolism as well as the movement of the write.
and then the shift from analogy to simile.. into a most rewarding, quasi circular conclusion.
Totally cool.
3rd Sep 2021 8:21pm
Great write dear shaman ... I really love this ... the sustained metaphor ... the flow ... the layers to it ... one of your best writes yet ...
