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NO MORE
No more will I let you treat me wrong,and get inside my head,
No more will I let you block me because of something innocent that I said.
No more will I treat people decently because I never get the same,
No more will I give second chances, which really is a shame.
No bloody more!
No more will I let you block me because of something innocent that I said.
No more will I treat people decently because I never get the same,
No more will I give second chances, which really is a shame.
No bloody more!
Published 31st Aug 2021
Author's Note
A very short poem but the perfect way to let out what I'm feeling right now.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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31st Aug 2021 00:23am
31st Aug 2021 00:25am
Anonymous
31st Aug 2021 4:52am
That's too bad...Sorry to hear that...
If it were mine, and I were inclined to revisit it, I might focus on the break between the 1st and 2nd lines, and the 3rd and 4th, where the speaker goes from the individual and particular, to the universal.
That's something I understand and relate to, but I might be inclined to look deeper within myself and attempt to contend with the tendency, confront it.
Enjoyed!
If it were mine, and I were inclined to revisit it, I might focus on the break between the 1st and 2nd lines, and the 3rd and 4th, where the speaker goes from the individual and particular, to the universal.
That's something I understand and relate to, but I might be inclined to look deeper within myself and attempt to contend with the tendency, confront it.
Enjoyed!
31st Aug 2021 8:55am
Hi Mark. Yes,I definitely need to change how I deal with people. And I knew the poem wasn't the best;I just needed to vent my anger at the injustice of the situation. Thankyou for your feedback;I do appreciate it.
2nd Sep 2021 1:29am
I totally get No More.
Let the anger rule and stew for a minute.
I have written a lot in anger.
Nice place to put the muck. Pen to paper!!!
And when all is written and done you get a bad ass poem.
Let the anger rule and stew for a minute.
I have written a lot in anger.
Nice place to put the muck. Pen to paper!!!
And when all is written and done you get a bad ass poem.
2nd Sep 2021 6:17am
Hi Adelphina. Yes,the writing certainly does help. Thankyou for taking the time to read mine.
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- Edited 4th Dec 2023 5:45pm
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