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NO POEM
NO POEM
Penetrating various variables of infinite parables
each separate section a cause for infection
of the inflection of perception before it's conception
the reflection of introspection is paused
for unneeded correction and pointless dissection
forever defending the impending unbending imminent ending
NO POEM
Penetrating various variables of infinite parables
each separate section a cause for infection
of the inflection of perception before it's conception
the reflection of introspection is paused
for unneeded correction and pointless dissection
forever defending the impending unbending imminent ending
NO POEM
Published 30th Aug 2021
Author's Note
This is recycled from my old clone
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30th Aug 2021 1:06pm
Anonymous
31st Aug 2021 6:21am
I like this line:
unneeded correction and pointless dissection
forever defending the impending unbending imminent ending
Although I'm not sure what it means--in any context--to "defend...[an] ending."
The verbal pyrotechnics are fine, but it's not clear to this reader how much I'm supposed to be invested in "doing the math" and figuring out the literal, linguistic import, or meaning, and how much I'm supposed to just "go with it," as an aesthetic device / technique / style.
Tend to enjoy much more than otherwise.
Nice!
unneeded correction and pointless dissection
forever defending the impending unbending imminent ending
Although I'm not sure what it means--in any context--to "defend...[an] ending."
The verbal pyrotechnics are fine, but it's not clear to this reader how much I'm supposed to be invested in "doing the math" and figuring out the literal, linguistic import, or meaning, and how much I'm supposed to just "go with it," as an aesthetic device / technique / style.
Tend to enjoy much more than otherwise.
Nice!
5th Oct 2021 12:01pm
This is basically a poem about trying to write a poem.
The writer is having difficulties.
He writes about his frustrations
and in the end
NO POEM
is a constructed poem........
The writer is having difficulties.
He writes about his frustrations
and in the end
NO POEM
is a constructed poem........
31st Aug 2021 5:21pm
