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The moon
Quietly, the silvery rays of the moon
crept into my room,
came up to me
and kissed my face
I woke up and saw the moon
gazing at me
with endearing but sad eyes
Oh, how I wish I could touch my love...
Could do nothing
but stared at my beloved
with pain
Knowing it can never be mine
But our love for each other
so pure and divine,
gives me a reason to live
and for it to shine...
crept into my room,
came up to me
and kissed my face
I woke up and saw the moon
gazing at me
with endearing but sad eyes
Oh, how I wish I could touch my love...
Could do nothing
but stared at my beloved
with pain
Knowing it can never be mine
But our love for each other
so pure and divine,
gives me a reason to live
and for it to shine...
Author's Note
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Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 6:06pm
Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:29pm
I'm in love with the moon :)
Thank you, dear poetess for the read n the comment. 😊
Thank you, dear poetess for the read n the comment. 😊
Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 6:09pm
Oh my I'm in love, that was so tender absolutely brilliant. I loved this read. Awesome job
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:30pm
Your presence on my page really makes me happy, dear Ron. 😊
And I love your comment....
And I love your comment....
Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 6:53pm
Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:31pm
Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 7:18pm
Love the last verse for the rhyme and poignancy:
But our love for each other
so pure and divine,
gives me a reason to live
and for it to shine...
But our love for each other
so pure and divine,
gives me a reason to live
and for it to shine...
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Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 7:47pm
It seems like I remember this one. Those final two lines are so softly striking, just as moonlight.
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Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:33pm
Re. The moon
26th Aug 2021 8:30pm
I love the story line and the deepest of the inner thoughts of affection and joy in sharing a golden opportunity to experience the best thing of love 🦋💖👊🤗
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Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:35pm
It's a joy to read your comments, dear Stoney...
Much thanks for gracing my page with your presence. 🌹
Much thanks for gracing my page with your presence. 🌹
Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 8:55pm
I always love the moon due to my animal wolf side of my soul of soul a very beautiful write🤗👍👊
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Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 2:18am
A telling that moves to a sweetly rhymed ending. One wonders what thought moved you to write "an old piece" bathed in moon light?
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Re: Re. The moon
27th Aug 2021 12:38pm
I'm a moon lover... And the time when I penned this poem, I was in love with someone... N yes, it was a forbidden love though not an unrequited one
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28th Aug 2021 7:00am
Re. The moon
30th Aug 2021 3:26am
I, too, have written poems about the moon. I find it enchanting as it rises each evening to watch over us. Thank you for your shared words. Peace.
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Re: Re. The moon
30th Aug 2021 10:17am
I have been fascinated by the moon since I was a kid.... There is something mystical about its beauty that's alluring...
I would love to read your poem on moon 😊
I would love to read your poem on moon 😊
Re: Re. The moon
31st Aug 2021 3:25am
Hello! I posted one of my moon poems just for you! Check out: ORB OF THE NIGHT.
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Re. The moon
13th Sep 2021 6:00am
This was so wonderful... A lovely poem to read on such a night as this ❤️
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Re: Re. The moon
13th Sep 2021 10:30am
Thanks a bunch, dear NB.... It so nice to see you on my page... 😊 How have you been?
And I'm really thankful to you for adding so many poems of mine to your reading list... 🌷
And I'm really thankful to you for adding so many poems of mine to your reading list... 🌷
Re: Re. The moon
13th Sep 2021 12:48pm
I have been okay, thank you 😊
And yourself?
I've been going through a transitional phase, and have not been nearly as active here lately - I just thought I needed to do a little catching up on your writing, and I was happy that I did ❤️
I've got out of the groove of reading and writing to DU... And wasn't sure if I would even use it again; but there are a lot of beautiful souls here that I miss... And a lot of great poetry that I missed in my departure. Yours included 🌹
And yourself?
I've been going through a transitional phase, and have not been nearly as active here lately - I just thought I needed to do a little catching up on your writing, and I was happy that I did ❤️
I've got out of the groove of reading and writing to DU... And wasn't sure if I would even use it again; but there are a lot of beautiful souls here that I miss... And a lot of great poetry that I missed in my departure. Yours included 🌹
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Re: Re. The moon
14th Sep 2021 5:35am
Health wise I'm not doing okay...
Yeah, DU is a great place but lately this sites seem to be dying as lot of people are either leaving or are simply not active...
Glad you gonna be here.. Miss your beautiful poetry.... Hope you post something soon.... *hugs*😊
Yeah, DU is a great place but lately this sites seem to be dying as lot of people are either leaving or are simply not active...
Glad you gonna be here.. Miss your beautiful poetry.... Hope you post something soon.... *hugs*😊
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Re: Re. The moon
5th Oct 2021 6:18pm
Aaah... What can I say, I'm a moon lover 🌙😍❤
Unfortunately Sometimes there are certain situations when two souls cannot ever unite... :( sometimes we just have to compromise with the situation.....
Thank you so much, dear poet for sharing your precious thoughts with me... I so appreciate that.... 😊🌹🌹🌹
Unfortunately Sometimes there are certain situations when two souls cannot ever unite... :( sometimes we just have to compromise with the situation.....
Thank you so much, dear poet for sharing your precious thoughts with me... I so appreciate that.... 😊🌹🌹🌹
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Re: Re. The moon
5th Oct 2021 6:45pm
Ooooo.... So you are an artist too! That's awesome... I'm so glad n honoured that this piece of mine inspired you to draw and pen a poem....😊 I shall be eagerly looking forward to your creation 😊
Re. The moon
2nd Feb 2022 8:01pm
Beautiful comparison. Love is that is approachable but not catch-able. You are sweet soul.
KS
KS
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Re. The moon
6th Mar 2022 4:21pm
What a lovely poem, InDreamz. And I also find the last verse to be my favourite.❤
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Re: Re. The moon
6th Mar 2022 4:53pm
I'm glad you liked my piece.... Thank you so much, dear Shabre for your kind review. Much appreciated😊
Re. The moon
1st Feb 2023 3:06pm
This poem is breathtaking. You are getting stronger with you images as well.
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Re: Re. The moon
2nd Feb 2023 7:39am
Thanks a lot for your kind words, dear friend. I'm truly honoured by the reading list add. 😊