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Foggy run
running through a cloud
drops collect on eyelashes
proving I exist
Author's Note
Surreal....
Composed on my morning run
Composed on my morning run
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Re. Foggy run
26th Aug 2021 3:01pm
Dear K,
I shop.
Therefore I exist.
Does that count?
I’m impressed. I think about what running would be like but then I just don’t. I love drops collect on eyelashes. Great affirmation write. H🌷
I shop.
Therefore I exist.
Does that count?
I’m impressed. I think about what running would be like but then I just don’t. I love drops collect on eyelashes. Great affirmation write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Foggy run
26th Aug 2021 3:43pm
Well, I guess someone has to do the shopping, and it sure as hell isn't me! I'd rather wear patched & tattered clothes (much to the chagrin of those who have to be seen with me).
It took a while, but I think I've finally made running a sort of addiction. I miss it on the days when I don't do it. Today was particularly soft, lovely and eerie.
Thanks for the RL and comment!
❤k
It took a while, but I think I've finally made running a sort of addiction. I miss it on the days when I don't do it. Today was particularly soft, lovely and eerie.
Thanks for the RL and comment!
❤k
Re. Foggy run
26th Aug 2021 7:10pm
Gosh, that's a bit keen isn't it?
Hmm. How do I know I exist today? Do the missing chunks of chocolate from the family-sized bar count?
Hmm. How do I know I exist today? Do the missing chunks of chocolate from the family-sized bar count?
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Re: Re. Foggy run
26th Aug 2021 7:23pm
Yes!!
The droplets were cool. I should add the photo I took.
Enjoy some chocolate for me. 😉
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The droplets were cool. I should add the photo I took.
Enjoy some chocolate for me. 😉
k
Re: Re. Foggy run
26th Aug 2021 7:29pm
Re. Foggy run
27th Aug 2021 2:14pm
Beautifully written! I love the rapid progression from the cloud, which appears dream-like and surreal, to the verification of physical existence - each line grows increasingly tangible. I think this is a very grounding, almost comforting poem.
Hope you enjoyed your run. That fog looks awesome.
Hope you enjoyed your run. That fog looks awesome.
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Re: Re. Foggy run
27th Aug 2021 6:18pm
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Re: Re. Foggy run
29th Aug 2021 3:45am
LOL ummm.... no. 😆 Only if there's a good sauna handy to hop into!
Thanks for stopping by to make me laugh!
Thanks for stopping by to make me laugh!
Re. Foggy run
31st Aug 2021 7:42am
Re: Re. Foggy run
31st Aug 2021 10:25am
Nice to know there are some other runners around here! Thanks for stopping by. 🙂
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