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The value of life & oxygen
Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
We shall thank you then for death.
People round the world gasping for breath, breathless,
short of breath, some unable to catch their breath,
some breathing their last,
some on artificial costly breathalysers .
How many times do we thank God
for the countless free breaths we breathe our entire life??
Oxygen o2 more valuable and scarce than diamonds nowadays.
Respiration, the main need of all life
Those who eventually recover from covid and find their breath again
can finally breathe a sigh of relief.
Yet heavenly sights in paradise will be sure
to take our breath away anyway.
Life or afterlife
Here and hereafter
Life's a gift from God
Now and thereafter
Why end it here and now
Why not extend fun and laughter?
When my DNA and RNA expires with me
May God Resurrect and revive it in me
I live and die for an extension of life in afterlife
God grant me that part eternity
To search for the meaning and purpose of life
is to search and find the Creator of all life
i know there's out there somewhere
in Allah's universe, a heavenly portal
that will lead me to eternal bliss
designed by Allah the immortal.
Imagine a perfect heavenly life with no fear , death or problems
That's a life to die for, when Allah transports us to those realms.
An abode with no sickness or illness
Only peace and total eternal happiness
No viruses but rather real flying horses like real Pegasuses
We could get to ride and fly the universe
with angelic wings without planes or buses
But you have to work to earn and deserve that heavenly paradise
Just follow God's latest holy book, so perfect and so wise.[/b][/b][/font][/font]
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
We shall thank you then for death.
People round the world gasping for breath, breathless,
short of breath, some unable to catch their breath,
some breathing their last,
some on artificial costly breathalysers .
How many times do we thank God
for the countless free breaths we breathe our entire life??
Oxygen o2 more valuable and scarce than diamonds nowadays.
Respiration, the main need of all life
Those who eventually recover from covid and find their breath again
can finally breathe a sigh of relief.
Yet heavenly sights in paradise will be sure
to take our breath away anyway.
Life or afterlife
Here and hereafter
Life's a gift from God
Now and thereafter
Why end it here and now
Why not extend fun and laughter?
When my DNA and RNA expires with me
May God Resurrect and revive it in me
I live and die for an extension of life in afterlife
God grant me that part eternity
To search for the meaning and purpose of life
is to search and find the Creator of all life
i know there's out there somewhere
in Allah's universe, a heavenly portal
that will lead me to eternal bliss
designed by Allah the immortal.
Imagine a perfect heavenly life with no fear , death or problems
That's a life to die for, when Allah transports us to those realms.
An abode with no sickness or illness
Only peace and total eternal happiness
No viruses but rather real flying horses like real Pegasuses
We could get to ride and fly the universe
with angelic wings without planes or buses
But you have to work to earn and deserve that heavenly paradise
Just follow God's latest holy book, so perfect and so wise.[/b][/b][/font][/font]
Written by
Zaynab_kamoonpury
Published 18th Aug 2021
| Edited 19th Aug 2021
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Re. The value of life & oxygen
18th Aug 2021 12:27pm
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18th Aug 2021 12:51pm
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18th Aug 2021 2:23pm
Thanks soo much for comment, do see the pics i have now put up for this poem. Best wishes,
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18th Aug 2021 3:32pm
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18th Aug 2021 3:31pm
Beautiful pictures and an A++ poem with much truth and meaning. Hugs and peace, O
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18th Aug 2021 4:10pm
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18th Aug 2021 4:14pm
You are welcome and look forward to more of your excellent and inspiring poems. Hugs and peace, O
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Re. The value of life & oxygen
18th Aug 2021 4:25pm
Dear ZK,
I truly enjoyed and appreciated your lovely poem of praise and gratitude for the many things, especially breathing, we can overlook and not remember to be grateful for. Your poem has given me pause for thought to express my own thanks for all the good in my world and I’m thankful to you for that. H🌷
I truly enjoyed and appreciated your lovely poem of praise and gratitude for the many things, especially breathing, we can overlook and not remember to be grateful for. Your poem has given me pause for thought to express my own thanks for all the good in my world and I’m thankful to you for that. H🌷
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18th Aug 2021 4:34pm
My warmest thanks dear for such a bright heartwarming comment, im glad if gratitude for blessings is conveyed through my poem. Take care, and best wishes, 🌷⚘
Re. The value of life & oxygen
18th Aug 2021 4:28pm
Great write, life is a gift and often we forget to give daily thanks. Nice job
Love and light
Ron
Love and light
Ron
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18th Aug 2021 6:14pm
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Um you see we believe in many holy revelations, the Torah, the psalms, the Bible and the latest in the series which is the Quran.
Cheers and have a great day.
Cheers and have a great day.
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18th Aug 2021 7:03pm
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2021 9:46pm
Hey Zaynab……..life is sacred and at times we’re not careful enough protecting it…….sometimes we choose the wrong options…….thought provoking ink……enjoyed this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Aug 2021 8:57am
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19th Aug 2021 1:38am
Mr. Zanynab,
You got me hearing George Harrison in the background. Cool write and message. Enjoyed.
down2dirt
You got me hearing George Harrison in the background. Cool write and message. Enjoyed.
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19th Aug 2021 8:58am
It's Ms zaynab plz, im a lady,
now i should look up George Harrison as you got me interested. Thanks soo much for cool comment!
now i should look up George Harrison as you got me interested. Thanks soo much for cool comment!