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Living Blindly
lived thru many
turbulent moments
eyes wide open
not seeing time
aging my soul
experiences I’ve
truly been blessed
touches of luv
to have shared
with sacred souls
don’t need eyes to
feel a fiery sun upon
my face or to
know a purple moon
shines down on me
before I take my
last breath there’s
a wish I so desire
that you would be
completely mine
purple flowers I
do request upon
my steps for these
eyes will see
beauty in darkness
Inspiration ~
“TASTE ME WHEN I CANNOT SEE BE FLOATING BLINDLY”
Written by Again
Copyright © 2021 flowergirl all rights Reserved.
turbulent moments
eyes wide open
not seeing time
aging my soul
experiences I’ve
truly been blessed
touches of luv
to have shared
with sacred souls
don’t need eyes to
feel a fiery sun upon
my face or to
know a purple moon
shines down on me
before I take my
last breath there’s
a wish I so desire
that you would be
completely mine
purple flowers I
do request upon
my steps for these
eyes will see
beauty in darkness
Inspiration ~
“TASTE ME WHEN I CANNOT SEE BE FLOATING BLINDLY”
Written by Again
Copyright © 2021 flowergirl all rights Reserved.
Published 16th Aug 2021
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16th Aug 2021 2:35pm
17th Aug 2021 00:24am
Hey Ron……luv it when I make you speechless…..Lol! Honored for the RL and luv the “wow”……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Aug 2021 5:54pm
Ohhh my lovely purple poetess! What beautifully written sentiments you bestow...
Your last line is left ringing in my head reverberating it's echo throughout my soul...
Potent and powerful!
🌹 - 💙
B
Your last line is left ringing in my head reverberating it's echo throughout my soul...
Potent and powerful!
🌹 - 💙
B
17th Aug 2021 00:28am
Hey Blue…….thank you my friend for the blessing for your words…….honored for the RL……thrilled you enjoyed this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Aug 2021 00:32am
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17th Aug 2021 00:34am
Hey Phantom…….there is always luv in the stars…….thank for your words…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2021 3:03am
Dear FG,
Beautiful poem. Your fourth stanza in particular caught my eye because I’d like that to be a special someone…alas…I really dig the concept of giving thanks to those who’ve had your back. We can never go wrong there. Lovely piece. H🌷
Beautiful poem. Your fourth stanza in particular caught my eye because I’d like that to be a special someone…alas…I really dig the concept of giving thanks to those who’ve had your back. We can never go wrong there. Lovely piece. H🌷
18th Aug 2021 2:30am
Hey H…….I luv your interpretation of this…….you’re so right……can’t ever go wrong with souls having your back……thank you for the blessing of making me smile…….honored by the RL…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2021 6:53pm
flowergirl,
It’s when we slow down and rely on our senses, that’s when truth shines through. Beautiful write.
down2dirt
It’s when we slow down and rely on our senses, that’s when truth shines through. Beautiful write.
down2dirt
18th Aug 2021 2:36am
Hey DD…….luv your different view of my words…….I’m actually lost for words to return to you…….thank you for such a thought provoking comment……glad you liked it……purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Aug 2021 9:39pm
A lovely poem with sublime appealing muse and great imagery of sun, moon and all. Kudos!
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
18th Aug 2021 9:42pm
Hey Zaynab…….thank you for smiling upon my ink……glad you enjoyed…….will check your work out…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Aug 2021 11:11pm
18th Aug 2021 11:25pm
Hey TIG…….Wowzers what a response…….I’m honored to have such praise from a talent such as you…….hugs from my heart to yours……purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th Aug 2021 5:37pm
WHAT MORE CAN ONE DO BUT RLD THIS In the summers of night when in heaven I visit gardes to see flowers all purple my blood if any will waer those few only purple would do Isee myself garlanded in the unknown arena oozing purple hue from my poetic sis purple you from you will wonder ever WHO
20th Aug 2021 1:02am
Hey Bro…….I’m glad you liked this…….you’re words were so inspiring……..I luv what you wrote as your response……..thank you……honored for the RL……purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Aug 2021 3:09am
