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Let me pee, let me pee, let me pee, let me pee In the handicap toilet, let me pee (Apologies to Sir Paul)
Why is the handicap toilet never free
non-disabled souls need lots of room to pee
they exit (finally!) see me and say, sorry
hard to make a stand, sitting, just let it be
non-disabled souls need lots of room to pee
they exit (finally!) see me and say, sorry
hard to make a stand, sitting, just let it be
Published 12th Aug 2021
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Written for a competition
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2021 1:25am
Hey DD……I hear ya……I see that happen so often……same with parking……good luck with the comp…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Aug 2021 6:26pm
flowergirl,
Like Rodney said, no respect. Thanks for the read and leading and ear! :-)
down2dirt
Like Rodney said, no respect. Thanks for the read and leading and ear! :-)
down2dirt
18th Aug 2021 6:19pm
18th Aug 2021 6:25pm
TheOralizer,
Ain’t that the truth! Sometimes there ain’t no wiggle time! LoL. Thank you for the read.
down2dirt
Ain’t that the truth! Sometimes there ain’t no wiggle time! LoL. Thank you for the read.
down2dirt
18th Aug 2021 6:29pm
18th Aug 2021 9:41pm
Wow great appeal in poetic rendering. Kudos!
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
Plz do just read my newest poem too.
19th Aug 2021 2:42pm
Thank you for the comment and I do sincerely apologize for the mr/ms mistake on my comment on your poem. For some reason I’m not able to reply on your site?
down2dirt
down2dirt
19th Aug 2021 4:19pm
Oh no probs i read your reply here, i switched off commenting on it as now i want more reads but it has enough comments.
19th Aug 2021 4:19pm
Oh no probs i read your reply here, i switched off commenting on it as now i want more reads but it has enough comments.
Best wishes,
Best wishes,
