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shame(less)~(a senryś)
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 6th Aug 2021
| Edited 30th Oct 2021
Author's Note
For the August Senryu Theme: Shame
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/5109/
©Blu2021
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©Blu2021
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Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 11:19am
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
6th Aug 2021 11:32am
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I quite like this comment, my dear poet!
Thank you for stopping by, Danny.
I really do appreciate you making the time and for the generous list add, too.
I hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself ;)
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
-Blu
Thank you for stopping by, Danny.
I really do appreciate you making the time and for the generous list add, too.
I hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself ;)
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
-Blu
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 12:33pm
Its hars to accept how others see us. especially when we always hide our own thoughts about it or doubt the validity of their observasion of us . trusting what is said usually comes at a price and sometimes that gives ti the disbelief of our beauty in the world
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Trust in general, can be hard to validate and confirm, even if it's been a long process that has painstakingly unfolded to allow trust to build and grow...The careful confirmation of blooming trust isn't easy, I get it, and I can definitely understand the hesitancy but there comes a time when you have to have faith in people (or a person) as well..... giving into the... possibility!.. The reinforcement of the good that is out there in the world and in turn the goodness within all of us....makes it all worth it... imo.
Just my thoughts 💭....
I adore your comments and know that they're not easy. I really really appreciate you making that effort, Colin!!
Thank you, thank you
(for everything!)
🌹 - S
Just my thoughts 💭....
I adore your comments and know that they're not easy. I really really appreciate you making that effort, Colin!!
Thank you, thank you
(for everything!)
🌹 - S
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 1:37pm
Absolutely beautiful, powerful, supportive. My favourite type of writing. Beautiful lady you smashed this message out the park.
I love this, love your work, love you my friend it is awesome
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
love and light
Ron x
I love this, love your work, love you my friend it is awesome
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
love and light
Ron x
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I am positively glowing from all your loveliness, Ron. I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, the unbelievably kind words and the boost to my morale. I am so happy you enjoyed reading and feel lucky in the support you bestow upon me... 🍀
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 1:46pm
You look beautiful and sexy just the way you are. Be you that what's sexy. Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 2:48pm
I always appreciate your support and faithful readership, Francisco.... You're always there without a doubt, and that is very kind.
🌹
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Anonymous
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6th Aug 2021 3:38pm
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
6th Aug 2021 4:13pm
lol... Awww.. I did.. I did.
Thanks for reading and the list add, too!
I appreciate you, Tim
*all smiles*
🌹 - B
Thanks for reading and the list add, too!
I appreciate you, Tim
*all smiles*
🌹 - B
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
7th Aug 2021 7:53am
Loving one self is the way to go. As long as you are happy that's what matters. Also I have love for many shapes and sizes, but that's a different story 😁hehe.
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
8th Aug 2021 7:16pm
heh heh heh...😈 👍🏻 💥🙆🏻♀️.. lol...
Thanks DC, I adore your comments and applaud them muchly!!
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts - :)
-B
Thanks DC, I adore your comments and applaud them muchly!!
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts - :)
-B
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
8th Aug 2021 7:13pm
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8th Aug 2021 7:16pm
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
12th Aug 2021 00:38am
I learned the principle you speak of long ago. But you put it in a package wrapped with a measuring tape bow. So many young women struggle with this as do the young men who see it in terms of physicality. Thank you my dear friend for illuminating with such unique words and concepts what this is all about.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
12th Aug 2021 7:33am
I greatly admire these comments, John. You're once again, absolutely correct. The lessons the younger generation learns of outward appearances being more valuable than the whole sum, is hopefully changing. The biggest concern is trying to get away from the stigmatization that society as a whole places on both man and woman, in ref to appearances.
I believe positive reinforcements of the self as a whole can lead to making positive changes in more than just the superficial but also the mental aspect as well. I think the third biggest cause of young adolescent deaths, is suicide. I believe the road to that terrible end begins, in part with a negative self image..... which is horrifying.
I am so grateful that there are those who see the importance of spreading a positive body image /self love awareness!!
Terrific comments, my lovely friend!
Ty so much
🌹 - S
xo
I believe positive reinforcements of the self as a whole can lead to making positive changes in more than just the superficial but also the mental aspect as well. I think the third biggest cause of young adolescent deaths, is suicide. I believe the road to that terrible end begins, in part with a negative self image..... which is horrifying.
I am so grateful that there are those who see the importance of spreading a positive body image /self love awareness!!
Terrific comments, my lovely friend!
Ty so much
🌹 - S
xo
Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
12th Aug 2021 3:38am
It's refreshing to see that pushing self love and acceptance is the most positive and powerful way to aspire those who are constantly bombarded and bashed with body shaming.
Wonderful piece.
Wonderful piece.
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
12th Aug 2021 7:34am
Yep, it's important, I feel.... glad you could feel it, too!
Thanks so much for everything, Walter!!
☺ - 💙
B
Thanks so much for everything, Walter!!
☺ - 💙
B
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30th Aug 2021 9:46pm
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Re: Re. shame(less)~(a senryś)
31st Aug 2021 1:12pm
I am glad you have kept in shape during this unprecedented venture of social distancing... I have been getting back on track with the exercise.... lol... So it's slowly but surely...
I appreciate your far too kind words, Rew, Thank you. ..... Your writing affects me and you should give yourself credit.... Sometimes I couldn't rhyme my way out of a paper bag... haha 😂...
We all have our talents!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts... I find it so valuable and it means a lot to me!
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
I appreciate your far too kind words, Rew, Thank you. ..... Your writing affects me and you should give yourself credit.... Sometimes I couldn't rhyme my way out of a paper bag... haha 😂...
We all have our talents!
I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts... I find it so valuable and it means a lot to me!
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
31st Aug 2021 6:10pm
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