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The Fairest Pain
I know this pain..
Why did I lock
Myself up in these
Chains?
Why do I feel this way inside?
Yet I'm comfortable with
This pain.....
I hate it,
But I'll hold on for one more day..
It's the fairest pain..
It holds me down..
But.. I'm alright with it.
Why did I lock
Myself up in these
Chains?
Why do I feel this way inside?
Yet I'm comfortable with
This pain.....
I hate it,
But I'll hold on for one more day..
It's the fairest pain..
It holds me down..
But.. I'm alright with it.
Published 25th Feb 2012
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26th Oct 2012 4:21am
love this line "It's the fairest pain" vary poetic. nicely done.
A suggestion though.
"Why did I lock myself up in these chains?"
It makes better sense I think to make this one whole line and to remove the capital in "chains" and in "myself"
A suggestion though.
"Why did I lock myself up in these chains?"
It makes better sense I think to make this one whole line and to remove the capital in "chains" and in "myself"
27th Oct 2012 7:26pm
