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Multi-faceted
Only in one direction,
the mountain waterfall rushes
It takes you to the world of oblivion,
Where dreams are like a masquerade
But he runs without stopping,
He is at the feet of the rugged mountains
Rocks twist ropes from him,
Appointing a sentence
The waterfall kisses the feet,
Pleasing the cold stone
He is looking for a way to her heart,
Because Love is so multi-faceted ...
the mountain waterfall rushes
It takes you to the world of oblivion,
Where dreams are like a masquerade
But he runs without stopping,
He is at the feet of the rugged mountains
Rocks twist ropes from him,
Appointing a sentence
The waterfall kisses the feet,
Pleasing the cold stone
He is looking for a way to her heart,
Because Love is so multi-faceted ...
Published 26th Jul 2021
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26th Jul 2021 9:42pm
27th Jul 2021 12:14pm
Thank you so much for the comment Ron. I am really happy you liked it. Love and light to you as well. x 🌺🌊
26th Jul 2021 11:34pm
A man looking towards her heart will do almost anything to get to that secret place. Her heart ❤
This is free flowing and beautiful sentiment
RL
BIG LIKE
This is free flowing and beautiful sentiment
RL
BIG LIKE
27th Jul 2021 12:15pm
My dirty mind went to another place a man might do almost anything to get to. lol Thank you for the beautiful comment PS. You made her heart happy. Love the RL and BIG LIKE. 🌺🌊
27th Jul 2021 2:36am
27th Jul 2021 12:15pm
Ah yes! Love and nature, what could be better? Thank you so much for the comment Francisco. 🌺🌊
27th Jul 2021 5:39am
27th Jul 2021 12:16pm
Thank you so much for the comment BC, I really love the compliment so much; it warms my heart. 🌺🌊
27th Jul 2021 2:13pm
27th Jul 2021 2:35pm
Thank you so much LDF, I respect your opinion so much as one of the best poets so I really love 'great flow' 'vivid' 'resonating'. Makes me think maybe it's okay. :p 🌺🌊
28th Jul 2021 8:56pm
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27th Jul 2021 4:47pm
Thank you so much for the comment Keilani. I am really happy you liked it! ;) 🌺🌊
29th Jul 2021 5:27am
Dear K,
Love is incredibly multi faceted and I wouldn’t have ever known that until recently. Your lovely poem is such a much needed reinforcement I could weep.
“ He is looking for a way to her heart,” I think this line is especially touching because for me the person I see doing this is emotionally blind. A beautiful and thoughtful write. H🌷
Love is incredibly multi faceted and I wouldn’t have ever known that until recently. Your lovely poem is such a much needed reinforcement I could weep.
“ He is looking for a way to her heart,” I think this line is especially touching because for me the person I see doing this is emotionally blind. A beautiful and thoughtful write. H🌷
29th Jul 2021 12:06pm
It is for the good and bad. You are such a lovely person that I hope those facets shine brightly for you. Being emotionally blind can be better than seeing sometimes. :) Thank you so much for the comment Honoria. I always love hearing from you! x 🌺🌊
2nd Aug 2021 7:51pm
Water seeks the path of least resistance; the lesson being don't over complicate it. The least resistance path to her heart may have some twists, but with time and inclination, the destination will be arrived.
Once I figured out you were using pronouns to identify a parallel animate (he) with an inanimate (water) objects, this turned into a lovely poem and sentiment. Nice work.
Once I figured out you were using pronouns to identify a parallel animate (he) with an inanimate (water) objects, this turned into a lovely poem and sentiment. Nice work.
3rd Aug 2021 11:53am
Yes! Some very good wisdom you have presented Da Vinci. The path of least resistance is usually the best. ;) unless you have a drama queen. lol
Thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you liked it and understood the sentiment. 🌺🌊
Thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you liked it and understood the sentiment. 🌺🌊
