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I love her
your blouse slips from your shoulder as we sit on the sofa,
looking ever more lovelier the more we grow older ..
Published 24th Jul 2021
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24th Jul 2021 1:49am
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2021 7:37am
I love the musical rhythms of the language here, as well as the shoulder...
Understated, but effective.
Enjoyed!
Understated, but effective.
Enjoyed!
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