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Love is...
When the electricity
Still entices me
It's clear to see
Our serendipity
Thank you for loving me
Still entices me
It's clear to see
Our serendipity
Thank you for loving me
Published 21st Jul 2021
Author's Note
By Pent
July 21, 2021
July 21, 2021
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22nd Jul 2021 6:25am
Dear M,
I thoroughly enjoyed your appreciation for the love shown to you. So many can take that for granted. It’s refreshing to know some do not. Lovely write. H🌷
I thoroughly enjoyed your appreciation for the love shown to you. So many can take that for granted. It’s refreshing to know some do not. Lovely write. H🌷
22nd Jul 2021 10:40am
24th Jul 2021 9:05am
There's no denying the heartfelt sentiment behind the deliberacy of word choices... power packed and not one wasted....
I appreciate the minimalism.
Well done :)
-B
I appreciate the minimalism.
Well done :)
-B
24th Jul 2021 2:46pm
Thank you B,
She inspires a lot of my poetry. For this, she had text me while I was at work, "the electricity is still running through my veins".
:)
Pent
She inspires a lot of my poetry. For this, she had text me while I was at work, "the electricity is still running through my veins".
:)
Pent
