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Thorns kissed the tongue painfully
A dark room, the sounds are blurred,
I crawl to his touch on my legs
All the rules, principles, frameworks are forgotten,
He whispers me in syllables in a breath
From the tips of my fingers, up to the shins above,
He draws the sign of infinity wetly
And He deeply, but calmly, breathes,
Dominance, filling his workshop
My lower abdomen will fill the unknown,
Pierces the nipples with needles of passion
I cannot promise to keep the vows of silence,
Without a sound in the hands of man wriggle
- Get on your knees and hands behind your back! -
/ Cold blade of forged phrases /
I will easily obey my Master,
Without hiding blue and devoted eyes
Barely rising, the curves are so smooth,
I will close all the risks of my palms at the same moment
I know that He will not make mistakes,
Only a beautiful low evidence
Wrists entwined with a tight serpentine,
-Relax! Trust! And just fly! -
I feel His web on my skin,
After all, this is the unforeseen Paradise
Desire mixed with pain in the cocktail
- Lie down without moving! I'll be back soon! -
Goosebumps instantly rushed through,
Minutes dragged on, as if in hell
The clock, like a pendulum, beat with hypnosis,
And dryness walked along the edges of the lips
Returned. In the hands of a royal rose,
And immediately from the doorway is excitingly rude
-Hold this rose! Clasp your teeth! -
/ The thorns kissed the tongue painfully /
His palms are expensive cashmere,
He smoothly penetrated deeper with his fingers
I shuddered all from the hot inside out
To the tips of my fingers and straight hair
Easily succumbing to a fierce cut,
I dropped diamonds of unrestrained tears
Spiked along the umbilical hollow,
Tearing consciousness from my depths
On the skin, scratching the passions of the paths,
Which will hardly be visible ...
He drank in a kiss drops of blood,
Which the rose lit on his lips
And the evening is painted in a shade of burgundy,
Mixing domination and fear in the palette
- Breathe, my girl, slowly, hotly,
I will breathe new life through your skin! -
After all, there is no noble gift on earth ...
/ My pulse overflowed over the edge. I'm drowning /
He brought me beyond the limits of consciousness,
Beyond my horizon and the remnants of boundaries
Once again I will wait only for His punishments,
And the sweetness of wet, salty fluids ...
I crawl to his touch on my legs
All the rules, principles, frameworks are forgotten,
He whispers me in syllables in a breath
From the tips of my fingers, up to the shins above,
He draws the sign of infinity wetly
And He deeply, but calmly, breathes,
Dominance, filling his workshop
My lower abdomen will fill the unknown,
Pierces the nipples with needles of passion
I cannot promise to keep the vows of silence,
Without a sound in the hands of man wriggle
- Get on your knees and hands behind your back! -
/ Cold blade of forged phrases /
I will easily obey my Master,
Without hiding blue and devoted eyes
Barely rising, the curves are so smooth,
I will close all the risks of my palms at the same moment
I know that He will not make mistakes,
Only a beautiful low evidence
Wrists entwined with a tight serpentine,
-Relax! Trust! And just fly! -
I feel His web on my skin,
After all, this is the unforeseen Paradise
Desire mixed with pain in the cocktail
- Lie down without moving! I'll be back soon! -
Goosebumps instantly rushed through,
Minutes dragged on, as if in hell
The clock, like a pendulum, beat with hypnosis,
And dryness walked along the edges of the lips
Returned. In the hands of a royal rose,
And immediately from the doorway is excitingly rude
-Hold this rose! Clasp your teeth! -
/ The thorns kissed the tongue painfully /
His palms are expensive cashmere,
He smoothly penetrated deeper with his fingers
I shuddered all from the hot inside out
To the tips of my fingers and straight hair
Easily succumbing to a fierce cut,
I dropped diamonds of unrestrained tears
Spiked along the umbilical hollow,
Tearing consciousness from my depths
On the skin, scratching the passions of the paths,
Which will hardly be visible ...
He drank in a kiss drops of blood,
Which the rose lit on his lips
And the evening is painted in a shade of burgundy,
Mixing domination and fear in the palette
- Breathe, my girl, slowly, hotly,
I will breathe new life through your skin! -
After all, there is no noble gift on earth ...
/ My pulse overflowed over the edge. I'm drowning /
He brought me beyond the limits of consciousness,
Beyond my horizon and the remnants of boundaries
Once again I will wait only for His punishments,
And the sweetness of wet, salty fluids ...
Published 21st Jul 2021
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2021 10:22pm
--sweet S&M...
Oh my, I feel like I'm in one of Jess Franco's movies...
What was here that worked: the rhythms, accents / syllables / scans; the location of the workshop; the image of his breathing filling the workshop; the way the voice tells the sub to breathe through the pain, breathe through drowning in fact, like a mid-wife, as the ending move of the poem.
Oh my, I feel like I'm in one of Jess Franco's movies...
What was here that worked: the rhythms, accents / syllables / scans; the location of the workshop; the image of his breathing filling the workshop; the way the voice tells the sub to breathe through the pain, breathe through drowning in fact, like a mid-wife, as the ending move of the poem.
22nd Jul 2021 3:04pm
Hey Mark! I had to look up Jess Franco and I definitely need to watch some of those movies. ;) Looks like my sort of thing for sure. Thanks for telling me what worked... I really love that. And thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you liked it. x
21st Jul 2021 10:30pm
There's a gripping tightness to your pieces that merges the darkness to a basic instinct. To be complete we need and feed off of certain emotions, there's so many releases in the proper dungeon/workshop. Super tight Lil X
'merges the darkness to a basic instinct' I love that I_IS_ME, we definitely do need and feed off emotions. I bet you have a wonderful and exciting dungeon and workshop. ;) I am so happy you found it super tight... and Lil X feels so endearing. :) x
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22nd Jul 2021 1:50am
Erotic depth of field
Best bdsm female writer on DUP
May I encourage you to post more ?
BIG LIKE
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Best bdsm female writer on DUP
May I encourage you to post more ?
BIG LIKE
RL
22nd Jul 2021 3:10pm
I love drowning in the dark depths of true pleasure and pain. Thank you so much for the incredible compliment. Deer in the headlights. I don't know about posting more but you do encourage me.
Thank you so much for the BL and RL. x
Thank you so much for the BL and RL. x
2nd Oct 2021 10:29pm
