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I, The Ache...
I am the one who you confess your hate to.
The one who always listens.
The one who knows no better.
Ever by mistake or maybe intentionally.
Still I'll be right here.
I'm not one to judge.
Pain is what we share and I hope you'll accept.
Hold it just for a moment.
It's meant to be left behind.
Forget me anytime, I assure you I won't mind.
My method's always the same.
You'll remember given time.
Don't misunderstand this relationship we have.
I take no joy in this.
It's all without intent.
I, the ache, am never far behind...
The one who always listens.
The one who knows no better.
Ever by mistake or maybe intentionally.
Still I'll be right here.
I'm not one to judge.
Pain is what we share and I hope you'll accept.
Hold it just for a moment.
It's meant to be left behind.
Forget me anytime, I assure you I won't mind.
My method's always the same.
You'll remember given time.
Don't misunderstand this relationship we have.
I take no joy in this.
It's all without intent.
I, the ache, am never far behind...
Published 20th Jul 2021
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20th Jul 2021 1:52pm
An acceptance of emotional give and take.... the mind ponders if it's DUP in general (because of the #deepundergroundpoetry theme) and it's the poetry along with a writer's purging of all that might ail, that is being discussed or perhaps it's more personal... either way, there are acts self awareness and selflessness within your piece that leave me in awe and allow for additional thought provoking....
A good think piece is always alluring, IMO.
I really appreciated and enjoyed this read.
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A good think piece is always alluring, IMO.
I really appreciated and enjoyed this read.
So very nice seeing you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
We purge all the anger that's inside us when we write poetry. So let's release our emotions in our poetry. Keep on writing.
