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Songs dark angels sing
(Sometimes I like the hell I create—
the hell of my very own making)
Hell burns hottest
from the base of the bluest fire
densely heated light
black and blue—
like bruises upon tender flesh
or breaks that expose of marrow
Excavating beyond hate and tough gristle
to cavernous discoveries
ripping themselves open
Oh to relish—
pure
sweet
agony
amongst the sounds of all that tearing
how it echoes, exquisitely
Encompassed fully,
to become a sort of song
a melodic swirl of a dark blueish hue
fantastical pain, this duet
severely, it penetrates the fathoms
core connecting core
within every single chord
played and sung
This, song of suffering,
born—
of bluerose water
and hell-fire
Thunderous,
it plays
accentuating palpable cries
with otherworldly sounds of
external welcoming abaddon
Author's Note
abaddon =a place of destruction : an underworld abode of lost souls : hell.
I enjoy playing with the idea of different versions of hell and their makings or the impetus thereof.
I'm also desperately missing some that have left DUP but who certainly still inspire.... Gone but not forgotten....We would bond within our joint love of darkness (even though that might surprise some about me )... A portion of this write was originally written a while ago and I just now updated, so I know it's disjointed a bit,
apologies... 🙏🏻
©Blu2021
I enjoy playing with the idea of different versions of hell and their makings or the impetus thereof.
I'm also desperately missing some that have left DUP but who certainly still inspire.... Gone but not forgotten....We would bond within our joint love of darkness (even though that might surprise some about me )... A portion of this write was originally written a while ago and I just now updated, so I know it's disjointed a bit,
apologies... 🙏🏻
©Blu2021
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Re. Songs dark angels sing
Anonymous
16th Jul 2021 7:43am
Danzig does Geology
I like how there's a kind of physiognomy--the psyche is compared to both the body and geology, and underneath the excavation of gristle...there's cavity, cavernous with echoes...of tearing!
Fascinating, like something rotted hollow from inside...
Like a sarcophagi, or reliquary, but one that was once organic, now a fossil.
I think the thing that really nailed it for me was the addiction hashtag. Sent me back to re-read.
I like how there's a kind of physiognomy--the psyche is compared to both the body and geology, and underneath the excavation of gristle...there's cavity, cavernous with echoes...of tearing!
Fascinating, like something rotted hollow from inside...
Like a sarcophagi, or reliquary, but one that was once organic, now a fossil.
I think the thing that really nailed it for me was the addiction hashtag. Sent me back to re-read.

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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 8:28am
I am extremely appreciative of your comments and the thoughtfulness you display here. It's not often that deep contemplative feedback comes along, to leave me thinking and pondering the depths of my own work. I hope you were able to derive additional motivations within that second read. I'm grateful you were intrigued enough to do so...
Thank you.
Thank you.
Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 11:37am
I, too, have a fascination with "the dimension of hell". I am of the mind that this dimension is very much a "personalized construct". I absolutely love to see this expressed, in any artistic mediums. One of my favorite shows, American Horror Story, the Coven season, delved into this idea, with the 7 Wonders. That was a real treat for my imagination.
This write is a real treat for my imagination.
... A self aware Blu Inferno... I fucking love it... I think that is one of the key aspects of "hell". The self aware part, like a dream that you you realize you are in, but there is no easy escape. (or no escape at all?)
I often ponder how our existence, itself, might be hell... I feel very alone in these contemplations, but also, exhilarated, like... Seeing behind the veil. I don't care if it is only me who sees.
Maybe there is something empowering about this... The bliss of misery. To invade the underworld. To explore the labyrinth of the impossible, seeking out the possible, because we can...
So thought provoking... I love this write very much...
(There are also people I miss around here. Hell is not as much fun without them;)
This write is a real treat for my imagination.
... A self aware Blu Inferno... I fucking love it... I think that is one of the key aspects of "hell". The self aware part, like a dream that you you realize you are in, but there is no easy escape. (or no escape at all?)
I often ponder how our existence, itself, might be hell... I feel very alone in these contemplations, but also, exhilarated, like... Seeing behind the veil. I don't care if it is only me who sees.
Maybe there is something empowering about this... The bliss of misery. To invade the underworld. To explore the labyrinth of the impossible, seeking out the possible, because we can...
So thought provoking... I love this write very much...
(There are also people I miss around here. Hell is not as much fun without them;)
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 5:02pm
The people we miss are honored in a small way by their ability to still motivate and inspire.... is my line of thinking....hopefully they'll feel a sense of warmth across an ethereal plane....
My sense of accomplishment is a true reward, when I read that you were treated by my words... Your comments always become a source of joy that I humbly thank you for. You, sharing the deep and insightful feedback that you do, is truly appreciated and adored.
All my gratitude, Cipher. ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo - B
My sense of accomplishment is a true reward, when I read that you were treated by my words... Your comments always become a source of joy that I humbly thank you for. You, sharing the deep and insightful feedback that you do, is truly appreciated and adored.
All my gratitude, Cipher. ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo - B
Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
Anonymous
17th Jul 2021 4:56am
So many poets have written about Hell--
Dante comes to mind, but also Milton wrote about Satan.
I feel like it's much more interesting to write about Hell than Heaven--
God says Heaven is beyond imagining, beyond description, so it's not much fun to describe something that's "indescribably perfect." But Hell, well, there's lots to describe.
Dante comes to mind, but also Milton wrote about Satan.
I feel like it's much more interesting to write about Hell than Heaven--
God says Heaven is beyond imagining, beyond description, so it's not much fun to describe something that's "indescribably perfect." But Hell, well, there's lots to describe.

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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
21st Jul 2021 6:39am
... and always so very personally skewed... I like that about the varied versions of hell that are depicted in movies TV and music, too... Heaven is the usual—clouds, white pearly gate, angels excetera... Not much differentiates when it's viewed through the eyes of many.... Hell is always miserable, sure but it's interesting to see how it's individualized, too... THAT'S what peaks my interest and leaves me intrigued....How and where people personalize their depictions of hell or purgatory within their own vast imaginations... What is it they see???
Thanks for reading and your comments...
I appreciate you.
🌹 - B
Thanks for reading and your comments...
I appreciate you.
🌹 - B
Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 12:07pm
Oh to dance with the Devil, you a truly gifted
Your work is amazing. Deep insightful sometimes using words I don't even understand lol
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
Your work is amazing. Deep insightful sometimes using words I don't even understand lol
Love and light gorgeous
Ron x
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 5:10pm
Sometimes we need that little swim into the darkness, affording ourselves the opportunity to steep for awhile.... soaking it in. I think it makes the light that much sweeter...
My heart soars that you enjoyed reading, my dear!
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - B
My heart soars that you enjoyed reading, my dear!
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 2:37pm
good morning beautiful Blue tantalizing write
I am very masochistic so the torture here
while striking an ominous tone also was very sexy too
I know that may sound odd but on a sadistic note yummy...
awesome write💕
I am very masochistic so the torture here
while striking an ominous tone also was very sexy too
I know that may sound odd but on a sadistic note yummy...
awesome write💕
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
It makes complete and total sense, Brenda... I am definitely glad you found that sense of eroticism within. I appreciate your thoughtfulness, the list add and all your kindness, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
Much thanks and love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Much thanks and love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 3:37pm
Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 4:36pm
lol...
It just turned into an unintended song... but I wholeheartedly appreciate you reading and I adore your thoughtful comments, Marks... It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🎶 Much appreciated.
🌹 - B
It just turned into an unintended song... but I wholeheartedly appreciate you reading and I adore your thoughtful comments, Marks... It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🎶 Much appreciated.
🌹 - B
Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 5:20pm
Re. Songs dark angels sing
Anonymous
16th Jul 2021 5:17pm
I need this printed out , how I adore it 💙♠️💙

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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 5:28pm
I very much appreciate that AMAZING comment, my lovely lady. I humbly thank you and my smile is from ear to ear that you enjoyed.
♠💙-🌹
xo
♠💙-🌹
xo
Re. Songs dark angels sing
16th Jul 2021 11:14pm
We go to hell and back. I would go to hell and back to rescue you. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
17th Jul 2021 2:48am
Awww... that's a lovely thing to say, Francisco!! I a so grateful for your thoughtfulness!!
🌹
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Re. Songs dark angels sing
17th Jul 2021 00:23am
Wow, just wow or should I say woe? Are you a demon or and angel? Or just a complete soul burning in a blue flame. Heaven manifest in acknowledgement of hell. Wow and woe.
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
17th Jul 2021 1:12am
Hee hee hee.... I suppose I fluctuate between angel and devil.... lol... but don't we all!!! 😇 👿
I appreciate you, Richard! I adore your ability to make me feel like I'm special when I'm just plain ol B.... I truly appreciate the list add and all the support you give me and my attempts to create...
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I appreciate you, Richard! I adore your ability to make me feel like I'm special when I'm just plain ol B.... I truly appreciate the list add and all the support you give me and my attempts to create...
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
17th Jul 2021 1:38am
Doing stand up comedy now? Plain ol B my a**, you have so much going on below the surface that doesn't exist in a mirror. The burning blue flame is so apropos, just a small flame until your hands are burned to ash trying to hold it. Don't try that same ol meek bullshit with me, I see you. Peace, love and mirth sorceress.
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Re. Songs dark angels sing
18th Jul 2021 12:54pm
Dear BV,
Of course my version of hell is when my clothes are too tight because I gained more weight (and none of those pounds are knowledge!) or my shoes pinch when they felt like clouds the day I bought them. 🤬
You had me at
“(Sometimes I like the hell I create—
the hell of my very own making)”
No more need be said. Namaste.😈
H🌷
Of course my version of hell is when my clothes are too tight because I gained more weight (and none of those pounds are knowledge!) or my shoes pinch when they felt like clouds the day I bought them. 🤬
You had me at
“(Sometimes I like the hell I create—
the hell of my very own making)”
No more need be said. Namaste.😈
H🌷
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
Hey there, H :)
That's definitely a deep version of purgatory, for me too!!... Because buying the next size up is almost a soul crusher for me! Uggh.... lol... Talk about HELL!! 😈
I love, love LOVE seeing your presence, my dear lady. I hope you are doing well and alls good within your sphere of living. I have missed you, and I just realized how very much, after reading your comments!! It really is sincerely great to hear from you!!
Yep, that self created hell is a true bitch!! I appreciate your kinship but I also understand that that implies you, too know the depths of those dark angels singing.... something that I don't wish on anyone.... Hopefully it's as sparingly as possible!
Thank you for reading, sharing your personal thoughts and for the smile you always, so generously leave me with...
Much love and hopes for joy your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
That's definitely a deep version of purgatory, for me too!!... Because buying the next size up is almost a soul crusher for me! Uggh.... lol... Talk about HELL!! 😈
I love, love LOVE seeing your presence, my dear lady. I hope you are doing well and alls good within your sphere of living. I have missed you, and I just realized how very much, after reading your comments!! It really is sincerely great to hear from you!!
Yep, that self created hell is a true bitch!! I appreciate your kinship but I also understand that that implies you, too know the depths of those dark angels singing.... something that I don't wish on anyone.... Hopefully it's as sparingly as possible!
Thank you for reading, sharing your personal thoughts and for the smile you always, so generously leave me with...
Much love and hopes for joy your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Songs dark angels sing
21st Jul 2021 4:58am
You wrote the place of weeping and gnashing of teeth with pure fire and grit. More engaging than Dante's inferno. And oh so filled with the sensations and emotional depth that are your signature. Grandly envisioned and powerfully etched.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. Songs dark angels sing
8th Aug 2021 3:04am
I'm not used to seeing dark or ominous writes from you, but this one you describe so well, it is filled with colorful array of despair and anguish. Perhaps as goldenmyst had also commented with Dante's inferno, that you took us into such a journey, filled with dread and curiosity.
Well penned.
Well penned.
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Re: Re. Songs dark angels sing
21st Oct 2021 6:37pm
Thanks so much Walter :)
I often shy away from writing about my darkness as I tend to feel self conscious or maybe a bit self-indulgent... not sure of which.. lol... I'm just not usually able to construct something that I feel is a decent offering... If that makes sense.
I appreciate you reading and I'm glad you enjoyed the journey!
I'm sorry I overlooked this reply... whoops 🤭
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
I often shy away from writing about my darkness as I tend to feel self conscious or maybe a bit self-indulgent... not sure of which.. lol... I'm just not usually able to construct something that I feel is a decent offering... If that makes sense.
I appreciate you reading and I'm glad you enjoyed the journey!
I'm sorry I overlooked this reply... whoops 🤭
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B