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Attending physician
The door slammed shut, the corridor is dark,
Breathing sounds excite the space
Today at the meeting only "all inclusive",
the Doctor prescribed such a medicine for me
Eyes are closed, the unknown worries,
you are standing next to me, exploding my fear
You brought me to your workshop,
where the games are held on your rights
You slowly enter deeper in a whisper,
Pressing me harder and harder against the wall
Squeezing your palms around my neck tighter,
From power you only become hungrier
Thoughts are stolen , consciousness is torn,
I smoothly flow down your feet
Our blood will spill with hot wine,
We woke each other up to drink deeply
With a sharp movement you tear me inside,
Weaving into my wrists more and more
Leaving traces, as if shadows,
Drops making it hurt more and more
Orgasm intramuscularly and intravenously,
My attending physician treated me today
Breathing sounds excite the space
Today at the meeting only "all inclusive",
the Doctor prescribed such a medicine for me
Eyes are closed, the unknown worries,
you are standing next to me, exploding my fear
You brought me to your workshop,
where the games are held on your rights
You slowly enter deeper in a whisper,
Pressing me harder and harder against the wall
Squeezing your palms around my neck tighter,
From power you only become hungrier
Thoughts are stolen , consciousness is torn,
I smoothly flow down your feet
Our blood will spill with hot wine,
We woke each other up to drink deeply
With a sharp movement you tear me inside,
Weaving into my wrists more and more
Leaving traces, as if shadows,
Drops making it hurt more and more
Orgasm intramuscularly and intravenously,
My attending physician treated me today
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Re. Attending physician
15th Jul 2021 10:34pm
Well now I need nurse to help with my blood pressure. That my dear was super hot. Great read, very visual absolutely loved it
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Attending physician
16th Jul 2021 1:03pm
I don't think that nurse would help to lower blood pressure Ron. ;) I am really happy you were able to visualize it and found it super hot. That means it was worthwhile. Love and light back at ya. xo 🏥💊🩺
Re. Attending physician
15th Jul 2021 11:50pm
I wish my doctor visits were like this
Best I can hope for is Nurse Velvet and a gentle prostate exam ....
A happy ending of unique proportions
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RL AWARD
Best I can hope for is Nurse Velvet and a gentle prostate exam ....
A happy ending of unique proportions
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Attending physician
16th Jul 2021 1:04pm
I definitely need this type of doctor in order to help me with my ills. Haha, oh boy did I get a visual from that Poetspeak... I hope you get to see nurse Velvet soon and she takes care of you! ;) xo 🏥💊🩺
Love the BIG LIKE and RL award, Thank you!
Love the BIG LIKE and RL award, Thank you!
Re. Attending physician
16th Jul 2021 1:45am
Re: Re. Attending physician
16th Jul 2021 1:05pm
I am always in need of a good naughty doctor to take care of me before, during, and after... ;) Thank you so much for the comment, Francisco. 🏥💊🩺
Re. Attending physician
A thorough exam internally and externally. Please disrobe. Lets get some "pictures" too. Breath in, hold, exhale. Open wide, do you feel any discomfort in your throat? The wood may taste slightly different than you are used to. Let's see you touch your toes. The sound of the snap of a glove.
I have a diagnosis for your ills. A repetitive, interactive treatment program is recommended at my personal clinic.
I’ll leave you a script for Love Potion No. 9, and stop taking “Bad Medicine”.
Respectfully,
Dr. Feelgood. 👨⚕️💉
The M. Crue Clinic
I have a diagnosis for your ills. A repetitive, interactive treatment program is recommended at my personal clinic.
I’ll leave you a script for Love Potion No. 9, and stop taking “Bad Medicine”.
Respectfully,
Dr. Feelgood. 👨⚕️💉
The M. Crue Clinic
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Re: Re. Attending physician
17th Jul 2021 3:53pm
Oh yes! a thorough examination and treatment plan is exactly what I want *always*.
I am sure you have some great reviews for your personal service. There is so much
I could say here but I am trying to be a good girl. lol
Love Potion No. 9 - sounds like you are using the good drugs too. Makes me think of 'Waterfall' and the reply quite some time ago. ;) 🏥💊
You have definitely put some thoughts in my head with your response. Thanks for that.
I am sure you have some great reviews for your personal service. There is so much
I could say here but I am trying to be a good girl. lol
Love Potion No. 9 - sounds like you are using the good drugs too. Makes me think of 'Waterfall' and the reply quite some time ago. ;) 🏥💊
You have definitely put some thoughts in my head with your response. Thanks for that.
Re: Re. Attending physician
1. Holy Smokes - That is an impressive memory pull on "Waterfall". I had totally forgotten.
2. Me planting seeds of thoughts - Yikes what is gonna grow from that...!!! But since you are like a nurturing garden with a naughty scarecrow, I'm sure it will be lovely poetry.
3. Reviews - 5* - Highly Recommended. LOL.
2. Me planting seeds of thoughts - Yikes what is gonna grow from that...!!! But since you are like a nurturing garden with a naughty scarecrow, I'm sure it will be lovely poetry.
3. Reviews - 5* - Highly Recommended. LOL.
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Re: Re. Attending physician
17th Jul 2021 3:49pm
Hey Danny. I am sure you would make an excellent physician so maybe you should
change your job. ;) So happy to intrigue you with something delicious and passionate.
Thanks so much for the comment. 🏥💊
change your job. ;) So happy to intrigue you with something delicious and passionate.
Thanks so much for the comment. 🏥💊
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Re. Attending physician
8th Aug 2021 2:01am
Loved all the submissive elements to this, the interaction and connection from dom to sub encompasses an unspoken mutual agreement that brings forth all the pleasure and satisfaction.
Excellent work Kx.
Excellent work Kx.
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Re: Re. Attending physician
14th Sep 2021 00:56am
That interaction, connection, and trust that is shared in such beautiful submission is indeed such a wonderful unspoken mutual agreement. Such incredible pleasure and satisfaction, and even sweet pain opening one to truly feel so much more! Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts Wally. 🏥💊
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Re: Re. Attending physician
17th Oct 2022 6:15pm
Well, once a doctor, always a doctor right? Oh yes! I know so many ways to cure yearnings and all the best treatments. Sharp like a syringe. ;) Ready to take your blood like a Vampire too. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts Ted. Sorry I have not been around here much lately. 🏥💊🩺
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