Sacred Throes

That's very sexy, I love the POTENT DREAMS line super hot work gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x

I thank you very much, Ron... it's difficult to write with such restrictions, for the comp piece like this....but I do like a challenge...... I appreciate you reading, the list add and I'm so so glad you enjoyed it!


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B

You had orgasm from the universe.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Lol.. I just couldn't help but giggle here.. thdbks, Francisco
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I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Tim.
All my gratitude for taking the time.



🌹 - B

Blu Foxiness in full effect...  (I don't have the TM thing on my computer or I must find how to do this)

I love the structure, word selection, and word placement.  (Very natural yet polished). All lend to a magical experience.

Thanks for reading and your extremely kind comments, Cipher. I am all smiles smiles you could feel the magic... that means a lot.



I appreciate you, my dear
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B

I’ll tell you what! This is absolutely gorgeous my beautiful sister❤️ I love subtle sexual innuendos.
I hate erotica when it’s all like out there with no enticing seduction, and very predictable sequences of porn on paper!  Which this is not!  Yay for us prudes who prefers the tease before the fuck ! lol this is a sure winner my BlueBoo.
Good luck in the comp sweetheart!
w00t w00t 🌹🤗😘♥️
Xo jackie

Thanks Jackie!!
I withdrew from the comp because I misunderstood the rules assigned but I still enjoyed this poem, so I kept it.... No worries!!.. lol
I too, like erotic subtlety as well. I'm so happy your could pick that up here!! 👍🏻


Your comments and thoughts made me smile and I wholeheartedly appreciate your generous list add.

Much love, your way ✨ 💫 ✨
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xo
BB

I liked riding this one, simple and yet so captivating :)

I agree, about the simplicity... completely. I intended that as I was trying to keep within the 50 word or less restriction for a comp entry.... but me being me, I still messed up and didn't qualify, because of certain phrasing here ...  I liked what I wrote and decided to keep the poem and just bow out of the comp... no worries though....  
 
I appreciate you and your comments  
-🌹-B

Oooooor you can write another one within guidelines and make it better than this one...  cause you know. You're you? :)

Noted.

xxoo
#0088

This showed me the paradise within beyond that third eye where Eden lies. You did a classy climax to the hilt of desire. Love the path this led me on. Best orgasm poem I've read in a long time or ever. Your melding of the spiritual and the ecstatic made for truly heady reading.

Xo
John

Heady is exactly the place and exactly the emotional state of being I was striving towards.... I am delighted you reached that same conclusion, John. To achieve an apex within subtly, was the goal.... lol... 😈... incognito, erotica... hahaha

I appreciate you reading, the list add and your kinship of thought
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xoxo
Susan

Wow, that opening stanza doesn't hold back and just pushes us right into the thick of it.
Nicely done. Now I gotta pick up all the pop-corn from off the floor.

hahaha....
I am glad to have given you a jolt, my lovely friend.
Thanks for such wonderfully thoughtful comments. I adore your feedback.

Warmest regards and appreciations,
🌹 - B