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on the cusp of....
I reach for you,
barely awake
my devilish body, aches
involuntarily
cocooned within hungry dreams
Longing for contact
desperation fills each breath
needing skin upon skin
deep heated friction
smoldering kindling—
synonyms, for how we touch
Feeling, you
everywhere
familiar and powerful
teasing with tenderness
intense, in knowledge
O' to be of surety
My back arches
unintentionally
as I exist where sleep morphs
into dire existential urge
glistening, volcanic
truth, in pure accelerant
Scorched, glowing embers
char such perfect edges
imagination infuses reality
lingering on the cusp
teetering
begging for transformation
I reach for you,
awake now...
finding us both
where fingers meet
salvation
and where dreams
find a way
of coming
true.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My #Nopoo for today
My #Nopoo for today
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Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:25am
ah the reverie of escape from dreamland and the misty curtain of sleep
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 6:31pm
Sometimes it's nice to exist in both dream fantasy and reality for those few moments....
Thanks for reading, SO.
I greatly enjoy your thoughts.
🌹
Thanks for reading, SO.
I greatly enjoy your thoughts.
🌹
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:26am
Absolutely beautiful girl you have some crazy SKILLZZZZZ. Fantastic write I was playing like a film in my head. Brilliant
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 6:34pm
Ohhh.... yes yes yes.. I like that very much, Ron. terrific comments, indeed! I humbly thank you and I'm so appreciative of such kind words and the generous the list add.... I value your opinions, it means a lot to me.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Re: Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 6:36pm
Thank you, dear poet.
Wonderful comment
and I appreciate your generous list add
🌹 - 💙
B
Wonderful comment
and I appreciate your generous list add
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 7:33pm
Then let your dreams pleasure you. Keep on writing you strong smart beautiful sexy woman.
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
They definitely do!
Thanks so much for sharing and being a faithful reader, Francisco
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Thanks so much for sharing and being a faithful reader, Francisco
🌹
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:21pm
Lovely flowing write ... silky as that desired touch ... finally felt ... well penned ... nice stanza variation to play with tempo ... excellent spacing ... you poemed in your sweet spot ... Bravo B ... when is that book coming out ... *nudge* ...
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
Your comments are so amazingly cool and just joy instilling... It's true. I am joyful, after reading! Instilling morale, confidence and motivation.. I consider myself lucky to be so fortunate and I definitely don't ever take it for granted... I adore that fact that you know and relish that 'sweet spot' as much as I do... Thank you so much my friend 🙏🏻
Lol... I felt that *nudge*.... 😂...
Perhaps one day maybe...... I dream.... ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Lol... I felt that *nudge*.... 😂...
Perhaps one day maybe...... I dream.... ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:22pm
Holy shit Blue, with every poem I'm sated yet filled with longing and desire until my soul can hold no more, until your next poem opens deeper yearning and my soul is over flowing, leaving still pools of myself on the plains of existence. Yet the pool's stillness hides passion beneath the surface that can only be calmed by losing myself within the poem and transforming myself. Oh, what power you have sorceress.
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
You make me blush deeply.. lol .... Ohh how I love your heartfelt sentiments... To be so lucky as I, with all that loveliness you bestow.... *sigh*..
My fortunes run deep and my gratitude even deeper.
I thank you for sharing your thoughts, your list add and all your supportive kindness.
Much love your way,
🌹 - B
My fortunes run deep and my gratitude even deeper.
I thank you for sharing your thoughts, your list add and all your supportive kindness.
Much love your way,
🌹 - B
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:27pm
Wow❣Wow❣Wow❣Lady Blue this piece is fantastic. It is acutely relatable, achingly so. This passage flipped both my sensual and sapiosexual switches,
"I exist where sleep morphs
into dire existential urge
glistening, volcanic
truth, in pure accelerant"
Mmmmmmmm🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Bravissima, Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
"I exist where sleep morphs
into dire existential urge
glistening, volcanic
truth, in pure accelerant"
Mmmmmmmm🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Bravissima, Goddess BB🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
I
MISSSSSSS
YOU!!!
(sending all my thanks, gratitudes and appreciations, of course,)
🐇❤️🐻💋🐻❤️🐇
MISSSSSSS
YOU!!!
(sending all my thanks, gratitudes and appreciations, of course,)
🐇❤️🐻💋🐻❤️🐇
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 8:38pm
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12th Jul 2021 5:00am
Re: Re. on the cusp of....
13th Jul 2021 6:42pm
Re. on the cusp of....
10th Jul 2021 11:35pm
Such a lovely feeling of space, freedom, and invigoration. You very masterfully control the tempo and movement, with creative application of punctuation; this piece has such a unified and controlled current. (a beautiful brook in some places/white water rapids in other places). I could really feel the "effortless exertion" of your creative process, like that of Mother Nature, herself, organically forming embankments and turns, for the consciousness of the water's routes.
Amazing work.
Amazing work.
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
12th Jul 2021 5:13am
Hey there, Cipher ;)
I am basking in your beautiful description...
of a brook vs white water rapids.... Such a perfect metaphor.... I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feelings ... I am so happy you could sense a natural essence emanate... ✨ 💫 ✨...
It's nice when the words and emotions are able to unite, just so.... it's not often that occurs.... sometimes I search for them.... or delve deep...
I am so appreciative and grateful for your list add, the generous sentiments and your time given...
Much love, my friend
🌹 - B
I am basking in your beautiful description...
of a brook vs white water rapids.... Such a perfect metaphor.... I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feelings ... I am so happy you could sense a natural essence emanate... ✨ 💫 ✨...
It's nice when the words and emotions are able to unite, just so.... it's not often that occurs.... sometimes I search for them.... or delve deep...
I am so appreciative and grateful for your list add, the generous sentiments and your time given...
Much love, my friend
🌹 - B
Re. on the cusp of....
11th Jul 2021 5:50pm
You've done it again, sweetness. Fifty shades of Blue...is that plagiarized? Somebody's surely thought of it before I did...I cannot believe how pure and innocent, yet hot as a hissing spitting radiator you make that moment and the lead up sound and feel. I wish I had that talent! 🥰😇😝🥵😎 Reading list all day long, love!!!
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
12th Jul 2021 7:07am
haha...
MARGO!
Your thoughts and extremely insightful comments are always such a pleasure to read. I am glad you could help me see through your eyes... that's invaluable to me, as I'm usually so hard on myself... I giggled at fifty shades of Blue... hysterical!! think this piece is incognito heated... I hope... I like riding that fine line between overt and covert.. haha... I truly appreciate you, the generous list add and all your support and encouragement, my dear. It means a lot to me....I delighted by the joy you found here!!,
I hope you are doing well.. ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect your way,
🌹 - 💙
B
MARGO!
Your thoughts and extremely insightful comments are always such a pleasure to read. I am glad you could help me see through your eyes... that's invaluable to me, as I'm usually so hard on myself... I giggled at fifty shades of Blue... hysterical!! think this piece is incognito heated... I hope... I like riding that fine line between overt and covert.. haha... I truly appreciate you, the generous list add and all your support and encouragement, my dear. It means a lot to me....I delighted by the joy you found here!!,
I hope you are doing well.. ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect your way,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. on the cusp of....
12th Jul 2021 12:21pm
Thank you so much, sweetheart. I am doing well, and it's good to hear you are as well. Always helps and makes my day to interact with your beautiful talented self. Much respect and love back to you always, love. Have a lovely, lovely day 🥰😘😘😘💞💛💞💛💞💛
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17th Jul 2021 5:58pm
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Re. on the cusp of....
21st Jul 2021 4:44am
This kind of salvation can mean more than that offered by a priest in his frock. The naked truth of what you put into words is there as a memory or a plan for an indeterminate future. Just the thought of this makes me tremble with desire. No one ignites me like you. This is everything a sensual poem can be soft fiery and romantic. I love where you took me tonight.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. on the cusp of....
21st Jul 2021 8:47am
I don't think that I've ever really received much better feedback than this... Salvation, he says.... No one but I, can ignite him, he says.... Ohh my how a girl does swoons.... lol....
This type of praise is difficult for me to address, yet don't for one moment think that I am not anything but 1000% grateful. My gratitude goes beyond....
An infinitum amount of thank you's, John ✨
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
This type of praise is difficult for me to address, yet don't for one moment think that I am not anything but 1000% grateful. My gratitude goes beyond....
An infinitum amount of thank you's, John ✨
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Re. on the cusp of....
5th Aug 2021 8:31pm
What a way to wake up in the morning!
It's as if dream and fantasy cross over to reality and start the day with a...
well, you know.
Excellent write!
It's as if dream and fantasy cross over to reality and start the day with a...
well, you know.
Excellent write!
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