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Lost Love
Missing her like crazy
Insomnia when she crosses my mind
Conscious of my actions
Hoping to at least hear her voice again
Emptiness is what I’ll forever feel
Love is what I forever lost
Longing for her attention
Emotional because I broke her heart
Sadness I can be no more
Unique was she to my unusual life
Aspiring so I can be a better man
Romance she knows I’ll always provide
Everlasting love if I get one more chance
Zeal and passion, I’ll bestow forever
Insomnia when she crosses my mind
Conscious of my actions
Hoping to at least hear her voice again
Emptiness is what I’ll forever feel
Love is what I forever lost
Longing for her attention
Emotional because I broke her heart
Sadness I can be no more
Unique was she to my unusual life
Aspiring so I can be a better man
Romance she knows I’ll always provide
Everlasting love if I get one more chance
Zeal and passion, I’ll bestow forever
Published 9th Jul 2021
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3rd Aug 2021 1:48pm
I enjoyed this and was struck by the slightly unusual sentence structure. The poem felt so natural that I was halfway through the second stanza before I realised it was an acrostic. Well done.
4th Aug 2021 6:44am
