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Beauteous
like a rose that grows through the earth
blossoming into her very own lure
enticing to the core
stimulating to the touch
her layers hold a story that begs to be heard
but only by her one true love
a beauteous is a work of art
she also can be a miserable mess
petals that been beaten down by rain drops
thunderous hurt by selfish neglect
every man desires a beauteous
not every man is up to the task
when a beauteous sleeps,
she should so peacefully
softly breathing into the night
being looked over by her partner
never knowing what abuse looks like
because happily ever after doesn't just happen
you have to take time and care
that’s what will keep her around
some men think it’s cool to be jerks
cheat, and beat their beauteous
till their back down in the dirt
control them with fear like a prisoner
never appreciating what they have
but that isn’t manly
fuck no, that isn’t anything
it’s about loving, not just lusting
friendship with partnership
looking at her like the flower she is
even if she’s upsetting
it just needs to be understood
that a beauteous is a rose
until she’s turned into thorns
blossoming into her very own lure
enticing to the core
stimulating to the touch
her layers hold a story that begs to be heard
but only by her one true love
a beauteous is a work of art
she also can be a miserable mess
petals that been beaten down by rain drops
thunderous hurt by selfish neglect
every man desires a beauteous
not every man is up to the task
when a beauteous sleeps,
she should so peacefully
softly breathing into the night
being looked over by her partner
never knowing what abuse looks like
because happily ever after doesn't just happen
you have to take time and care
that’s what will keep her around
some men think it’s cool to be jerks
cheat, and beat their beauteous
till their back down in the dirt
control them with fear like a prisoner
never appreciating what they have
but that isn’t manly
fuck no, that isn’t anything
it’s about loving, not just lusting
friendship with partnership
looking at her like the flower she is
even if she’s upsetting
it just needs to be understood
that a beauteous is a rose
until she’s turned into thorns
Published 4th Jul 2021
Author's Note
A edit of a older poem.
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16th Jan 2022 11:45am
Great poem, nice flow and beautiful imagery. I particularly liked the line “petals that been beaten down by rain drops.”
If it rhymed it would be perfect, but that is just personal preference on my part.
I hope there is a Beauteous in your life.
If it rhymed it would be perfect, but that is just personal preference on my part.
I hope there is a Beauteous in your life.
