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For Physicists
( After Margaret Atwood )
Before the embryo
that multicellular organism
something cracked—
the egg, wafting
as cottonwood
suspended
within
a deeply folded
mucosal surface.
A precursor of cells
differentiating themselves
into angioblasts,
giving rise
to a formation;
roadmaps of vessels
and stem cells
segregating
into elements.
One ellele
from each parent
contains every ancestor's DNA
before us; conjoined
manufactures
its own blood and cells
to evolve—
survive.
Blood is the Breath
that bellows life
into human form,
an archaeological archive
continuing its course
through hollow bones,
until whitewashed
earthen fossils
burying another lifetime
in our Akashic records.
~
Before the embryo
that multicellular organism
something cracked—
the egg, wafting
as cottonwood
suspended
within
a deeply folded
mucosal surface.
A precursor of cells
differentiating themselves
into angioblasts,
giving rise
to a formation;
roadmaps of vessels
and stem cells
segregating
into elements.
One ellele
from each parent
contains every ancestor's DNA
before us; conjoined
manufactures
its own blood and cells
to evolve—
survive.
Blood is the Breath
that bellows life
into human form,
an archaeological archive
continuing its course
through hollow bones,
until whitewashed
earthen fossils
burying another lifetime
in our Akashic records.
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 2nd Jul 2021
Author's Note
Inspirational poem: 'For Archaeologists': https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=31176
Classic Corner Tribute: Margaret Atwood: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11965/#537278
Classic Corner Tribute: Margaret Atwood: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11965/#537278
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Re. For Physicists
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2021 10:29am
I could totally see the relationship between this and the inspiration poem. Towards the end, I got the impression of touring the inside of a bone as if it were a cave and studying paintings done in smeared blood and marrow. Bravo for fueling this imagination!

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Re: Re. For Physicists
6th Jul 2021 3:12am
Thanks! So happy that came through. I LOVE your interpretation of the end! Beautiful imagination.
xo
xo
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6th Jul 2021 3:12am
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2nd Jul 2021 9:55pm
An amazing story. You bring a sense of wonder and marvel to biology and physics.
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6th Jul 2021 3:13am
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3rd Jul 2021 10:24am
Good stuff, Margret sends us scurrying with our trowels trying to unearth some artefact of hidden truth
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6th Jul 2021 3:13am
Re. For Physicists
3rd Jul 2021 3:52pm
Love your mind sister of mine
I always enjoy your poetry your writings your notes.
Hugs you Ava 😘♥️
Jackie 🤗🤗
I always enjoy your poetry your writings your notes.
Hugs you Ava 😘♥️
Jackie 🤗🤗
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6th Jul 2021 3:13am
Re. For Physicists
3rd Jul 2021 6:19pm
I am terribly fascinated by the building blocks of life, all the down to the deeply interesting world of quantum physics. I really like how you approached this wonderful excursion into aspects and elements of life, including both the physical part of the process, as well as the spiritual... I really love that! No easy achievement, but you did it resoundingly well.
A is for Awesome and Amazing.
A is for Awesome and Amazing.
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Re: Re. For Physicists
6th Jul 2021 3:15am
Thank you, Cipher. I love history, science ( quantum physics ) and the spirtual. I believe they all work in conjunction: just as evolution and creation should.
Appreciate your views.
Appreciate your views.
Re. For Physicists
3rd Jul 2021 6:40pm
Favourite lines (as one who thinks without blood there is no life):
Blood is the Breath
that bellows life
into human form,
Blood is the Breath
that bellows life
into human form,
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6th Jul 2021 3:15am
Re. For Physicists
4th Jul 2021 8:49pm
I feel like this is the pinnacle of your science-cum-spirituality style and theme. The flow and intensity are pitch perfect.
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Re: Re. For Physicists
6th Jul 2021 3:16am
Thank you, Jack! You know I love science and spirituality ( throw a bit of history in too )! I appreciate your comment. xo
Re. For Physicists
24th Jul 2021 2:28am
All the beauty, all the trauma, all the joys, all the horror of proceeding generation's written into our genomes.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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24th Jul 2021 8:36pm
Re. For Physicists
28th Jul 2021 5:29am
I love the scientific observation of this and of Margaret Atwood, her naturalist philosophy reminds me of Mary Oliver a little bit except she's the compete opposite with doing so many interviews compared to her. I'm still working on an entry :)
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Re: Re. For Physicists
28th Jul 2021 4:02pm
Thank you, PR. I love the conjunction of science and woo woo! I do agree Atwood has an insight akin to Olivers, yet she was more of an extrovert vs introvert. It's very interesting to compare the two.
I am looking forward to your submission. xo
I am looking forward to your submission. xo
Re. For Physicists
28th Jul 2021 8:21pm
1. It's Educational
2. It's versed beautifully
3. It's also spiritual, just as you have themed.
It's wonderful when you can pay tribute to a writer, inspiring others to delve into her work.
2. It's versed beautifully
3. It's also spiritual, just as you have themed.
It's wonderful when you can pay tribute to a writer, inspiring others to delve into her work.
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28th Jul 2021 8:38pm
Thank you, Wally. I deeply appreciate that. Hope to see you back in the classics soon.