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windchime crusifixion
..empty shell hangs from a rope..
..waiting for sunrise to find him..
..the subtlty of the air current of summer..
..limits weighed oscillation..
..head trauma by way of wrench..
..is what knocked the soul free..
(someone left a rose at the foot of the tree)
..waiting for sunrise to find him..
..the subtlty of the air current of summer..
..limits weighed oscillation..
..head trauma by way of wrench..
..is what knocked the soul free..
(someone left a rose at the foot of the tree)
Published 23rd Jan 2010
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2010 1:27pm
visuality of this piece, you make of the windchime a searing picture of suicide, reminds me of Sylvia Plath who could make the beautiful unfurl to reveal haunting emotions, Beautiful nathan.
24th Jan 2010 2:45am
actually it was murder.. not suicide but thank you so much for comparing me to sylvia plath
