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The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
Whimsy in lilac
with hopeful petals streaming
as hearts break perfect
Author's Note
©Blu2021
For H.
Who asked for something pretty.
I hope you like it, my friend
🌹
Pic: mine
For H.
Who asked for something pretty.
I hope you like it, my friend
🌹
Pic: mine
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Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
14th Jun 2021 8:06am
Ahh...... :)
Love & Lovely.
I am reminded of the The Last Samurai. "They are all perfect."
And indeed, they are.
I do not completely know my flowers but is that a lotus in your avatar, Blu? ooohhh. aaahhh.
Strangely enough I was asked if I was a flower what flower I would be. I didn't know but then my reply was that I would be a mystical lotus flower that induced states of higher consciousness.
or an undiscovered flower on a tree with bark that looks like hieroglyphics in a forest of light and shadow that induces strange visions and states of higher consciousness.
Nevertheless... This write effects me deeply and is like a panacea for the soul. :))
Love & Lovely.
I am reminded of the The Last Samurai. "They are all perfect."
And indeed, they are.
I do not completely know my flowers but is that a lotus in your avatar, Blu? ooohhh. aaahhh.
Strangely enough I was asked if I was a flower what flower I would be. I didn't know but then my reply was that I would be a mystical lotus flower that induced states of higher consciousness.
or an undiscovered flower on a tree with bark that looks like hieroglyphics in a forest of light and shadow that induces strange visions and states of higher consciousness.
Nevertheless... This write effects me deeply and is like a panacea for the soul. :))
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Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
15th Jun 2021 2:20am
Yes, it's a lotus, indeed ;)
Thanks for the lovely comments and the beautiful sentiments, my dear poet.
I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading.
🌲🌱🌸🥀💮🌷🏵️🌹🌸🌻🌼🌱🌲
-💙
B
Thanks for the lovely comments and the beautiful sentiments, my dear poet.
I am all smiles that you enjoyed reading.
🌲🌱🌸🥀💮🌷🏵️🌹🌸🌻🌼🌱🌲
-💙
B
Anonymous
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14th Jun 2021 8:06am
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Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
14th Jun 2021 8:20am
That my beautiful friend was absolutely delightful
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
15th Jun 2021 2:16am
Thanks so much, Ron
Glad you think so - 🌸
I appreciate the lovely comments and the generous list add
Much love....
🌹 - 💙
B
Glad you think so - 🌸
I appreciate the lovely comments and the generous list add
Much love....
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
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14th Jun 2021 9:39pm
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Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
14th Jun 2021 10:15pm
Likewise, my friend and I will continue to!!
I very much appreciate you.
🌹 - 💙
-B
I very much appreciate you.
🌹 - 💙
-B
Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
14th Jun 2021 10:08pm
Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
14th Jun 2021 10:17pm
Aww.. as did this comment, LilD ✨
Ty so very much.... for everything.
🌹 - 💙
xo
Ty so very much.... for everything.
🌹 - 💙
xo
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15th Jun 2021 2:20am
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Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
16th Jun 2021 4:36am
Dear BV,
Absolutely gorgeous. A sweet relief from all the yuck and so appreciated. “With hopeful petals streaming” yes! Like a pretty rain shower but soft and you don’t get soggy. Beautiful and thank you for such a lovely bit of cheer. H🌷
Absolutely gorgeous. A sweet relief from all the yuck and so appreciated. “With hopeful petals streaming” yes! Like a pretty rain shower but soft and you don’t get soggy. Beautiful and thank you for such a lovely bit of cheer. H🌷
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Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
22nd Jun 2021 9:58pm
A poem short yet vast as the artistry of nature’s pageant but so much more when the flower represents heartbreak. Grand.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
23rd Jun 2021 4:58am
Awww, I adore 'Grand'... Thank you for that loveliness, John. I truly love haiku and senryú, they're always fun and interesting to read and write for me.
I appreciate your kind and generous list add and the joy your words bring....
Always so nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
-Susan
I appreciate your kind and generous list add and the joy your words bring....
Always so nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
-Susan
Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
20th Jul 2021 00:40am
Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
20th Jul 2021 1:17am
Thanks Walter!
I love the walks and the haiku!
Glad you enjoyed reading
🌹 - B
I love the walks and the haiku!
Glad you enjoyed reading
🌹 - B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Nov 2021 4:45pm
21st Oct 2021 2:56pm
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Re: Re. The perfection of heartbreak ~~~ (a haiku)
21st Oct 2021 3:07pm
Thanks so much! I am happy you enjoyed reading and viewing.
Much obliged, for the list add and the visit, itself.
A lovely pleasure! ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Much obliged, for the list add and the visit, itself.
A lovely pleasure! ✨
🌹 - 💙
B