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Chess as Communication
The silhouette of a ship’s sails
in the corner of my eye
As I am out to sea… Just to see
Destiny?
Mercurial moonshine
in a tipsy turvy line
that travels across time
With reason & rhyme
The space between
is communication
in this space
so full of space
* * *
Vibrations
over
U’s
sent
to
you
* * *
Communication
between
human & human
begins
as the language of aliens
the strangest of signs
delivered digital
across platforms
to frameworks of the mind – mental
And for reasons
I cannot explain
she sat across from me – over the membrane
as the chess pieces were already arranged
to me… it’s not about winning this game
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(Its a long story… (it seems I have a lot of those:) I guess I delved into online dating. Such a strange thing. I know it is probably something you know about, as, I don’t know, 40% of couples met online. It is not really my thing, but somehow I guess I sort of tried it. As you might know by now, I have been an ultra private person, historically, so of course, I would typically be deterred by anything that requires self disclosure. But as you may also know, I am kind of crazy/someone told me like a fox :). So I find myself communicating on this strange platform, reflecting on philosophical concepts of inter-personal communication, and sharing the thing with my bestest friends :). (oh… and I sort of liked this picture, with the madman eyes/or maybe ninja eyes, that I took, whenever, as it seemed to fit with the write… I like the symmetry. I called the photo “Duality”. And, of course, I had to scribble my name on the wall in graffiti :).
Published 11th Jun 2021
Author's Note
As I prepare to post this... for some strange reason I feel like my heart is going to stop. :). You can laugh... I am...WTF+W in thee F=Strange.
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2021 11:54am
You are brave, and this is amazing.
11th Jun 2021 12:07pm
11th Jun 2021 12:30pm
11th Jun 2021 12:47pm
Many thanks.
I love chess as well.
Btw this is a companion piece to
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/420154-communication-as-chess/
I love chess as well.
Btw this is a companion piece to
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/420154-communication-as-chess/
11th Jun 2021 1:07pm
A very unique approach but one that challenges one to think. Thanks, and peace, oral
11th Jun 2021 1:40pm
Thank you Oral.
That is very cool and very kind. I am greatly appreciative.
Peace be with you
That is very cool and very kind. I am greatly appreciative.
Peace be with you
11th Jun 2021 1:11pm
Nobody likes to admit they use dating sites but they do work.
We are all connected 24/7 to some electronic media, what's the difference how you meet ? And yes you do have to disclose personal info. We all like to think of ourselves as private people ...
Disclosure: my wife and I met on a dating site pre-internet.
That's all I'll say
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We are all connected 24/7 to some electronic media, what's the difference how you meet ? And yes you do have to disclose personal info. We all like to think of ourselves as private people ...
Disclosure: my wife and I met on a dating site pre-internet.
That's all I'll say
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11th Jun 2021 1:41pm
11th Jun 2021 2:37pm
11th Jun 2021 2:45pm
I can't help but love this comment. :)
Thank you ever so much, Numer.
I very much appreciate.
Thank you ever so much, Numer.
I very much appreciate.
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13th Jun 2021 4:45pm
Thank you for your understanding and insight Tim. Yes... It is an interesting state of affairs. :)
11th Jun 2021 5:08pm
If one is going to venture into online dating, chess is the best avenue, imho. It highlights the intellect amd often mentality of the players, which is crucial in today's times.
My father taught all his children to play chess beginning around 4-6 years of age. We had many a conversation over long games as I grew older. It's where he shared his innate wisdom with me.
I enjoyed this vulnerability very much.
My father taught all his children to play chess beginning around 4-6 years of age. We had many a conversation over long games as I grew older. It's where he shared his innate wisdom with me.
I enjoyed this vulnerability very much.
13th Jun 2021 4:53pm
I completely agree. I think that you possibly get to know a person in a deeper and more profound way, depending on the medium and the manner in which the medium is employed, those which afford higher levels of creativity being the most conducive to in depth analysis and connectivity. I think certain mediums (within the technology umbrella) are extremely complex, psychologically speaking and are almost like art onto themselves... so fucking cool... and if it is the right person on the other side of the chess board... magic can certainly come about...
So... I had this acid trip in a very gloomy environment...
I had this vision... of art as crypto currency...
I know we have digital art... but this vision was way different than that...
I sort of want to write about it... but I have to get there in terms of where I am in the disclosure of my story, you might say...
I think you A would be someone who would perhaps dig that part of the story.
Nevertheless, my gratitude for your vibrations and brain waves knows no bounds....
So... I had this acid trip in a very gloomy environment...
I had this vision... of art as crypto currency...
I know we have digital art... but this vision was way different than that...
I sort of want to write about it... but I have to get there in terms of where I am in the disclosure of my story, you might say...
I think you A would be someone who would perhaps dig that part of the story.
Nevertheless, my gratitude for your vibrations and brain waves knows no bounds....
12th Jun 2021 4:51am
Dear CO,
I really dig your honesty and courage. To me dating is rather like Chess. A game of strategy until you feel comfortable enough to toss the board. I really enjoyed your insight and reflection on the game and the dating scene. Your question of destiny? Only time tells us that one. Terrific write. H🌷
I really dig your honesty and courage. To me dating is rather like Chess. A game of strategy until you feel comfortable enough to toss the board. I really enjoyed your insight and reflection on the game and the dating scene. Your question of destiny? Only time tells us that one. Terrific write. H🌷
13th Jun 2021 5:04pm
That is an outstanding analogy, H. Which is characteristic of your very high aptitude for revelations of precious stones.
There is a lot more I thought about sharing, regarding "the game and the dating scene"
I have an idea for a book, in this regard...
There is a lot more I thought about sharing, regarding "the game and the dating scene"
I have an idea for a book, in this regard...
13th Jun 2021 8:21am
Bold yet vulnerable write ... love how you chronicled this ... so relevant ... immediate in this digital world we live in ... thank you so much for sharing ...
13th Jun 2021 5:11pm
Thank you Lil. I very much appreciate this, as your boldness has been an inspiration to me. :)
I do believe it is the duty of the poet/ess to be bold, risk taking, and revolutionary.
Although such things were never meant to be easy, were they?
I also am terribly interested in the concept of modern poetry as the expression of immediacy and modernity. Something that has been running in the back of my mind.
I do believe it is the duty of the poet/ess to be bold, risk taking, and revolutionary.
Although such things were never meant to be easy, were they?
I also am terribly interested in the concept of modern poetry as the expression of immediacy and modernity. Something that has been running in the back of my mind.
13th Jun 2021 8:45pm
I enjoyed the piece and like that you wrote a pretty awesome author's note. I love the honesty.
13th Jun 2021 9:36pm
26th Jun 2023 4:38am
I love dating and I love chess. They do not feel very different. The energies of what and when to move where. The satisfaction at the end no matter who took the king, or in the gracious toppling of the Man, or in the stalemate of no losers. Thank you for sharing ! 💜♟️♟️💜
