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11:22
11 22
i woke
you were on my mind
we spoke
mind to mind
or was it just
imagining...
I feel I must
penetrate
the space between
where you lie
and where I dream
by concentrating
then to twist
a beam of thought,
a swirling mist
faster than
the speed of light
in an instant
so you might
feel me enter
inside where
you retreat alone
to dare
penetrate
the endless stream
in which we lie
with a thought beam
i woke
you were on my mind
we spoke
mind to mind
or was it just
imagining...
I feel I must
penetrate
the space between
where you lie
and where I dream
by concentrating
then to twist
a beam of thought,
a swirling mist
faster than
the speed of light
in an instant
so you might
feel me enter
inside where
you retreat alone
to dare
penetrate
the endless stream
in which we lie
with a thought beam
Published 9th Jun 2021
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9th Jun 2021 3:02pm
This was pure smooth lovelies when i first read it aloud, and your audio delivers just as smooth.
"feel me enter
inside where
you retreat alone
to dare"
~this deep lil bit right here is sooo powerful.
magicks n burn in this, poet.. i enjoyed ;)
~d
"feel me enter
inside where
you retreat alone
to dare"
~this deep lil bit right here is sooo powerful.
magicks n burn in this, poet.. i enjoyed ;)
~d
9th Jun 2021 4:22pm
11 and 22 are numerologically significant numbers...seeing them on my bedside clock inspired me to sit up and write...I am happy you resonated with this...thanks for the insightful comment D... Lawrence
