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200 instances of soulful betterment.
Attempts and failures,
lessons that will forever live
in warm memories
and a heart
that swells
in prideful humility
The pure joy
of new friendships
trusted confidants
and simply, the most
generous, beautiful hearts
Becoming woven
within nature's bosom
to better understand
my own place
in the world
(ongoing)
Learned structure,
fused of raw empathy
to eyes open in truth—
That living my humanity
fearlessly on the page
is where
I've finally understood
my own soul's
cemented purpose
#Nopoo
(#200)
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My 200th #Nopoo.
Investing concerted time in something that is outside of just myself has become life improving. Learning from a spiritual place composed mostly of reading and writing (and some of speaking out into the ether) that friendship of appreciation can quite possibly exist on another plane, is priceless. There are tremendous blessings that writing every day has taught me; those bonds of love, stark reality, self care, natural surroundings and so far such an amazing opportunity and capacity to love.....I've learned—don't foolishly squander, well anything, away because whatever it is that is your 'thing', it's certainly out there.......you just have to find it.
Thanks, Soulman- 🙏🏻✨ 💫 ✨
💙
My 200th #Nopoo.
Investing concerted time in something that is outside of just myself has become life improving. Learning from a spiritual place composed mostly of reading and writing (and some of speaking out into the ether) that friendship of appreciation can quite possibly exist on another plane, is priceless. There are tremendous blessings that writing every day has taught me; those bonds of love, stark reality, self care, natural surroundings and so far such an amazing opportunity and capacity to love.....I've learned—don't foolishly squander, well anything, away because whatever it is that is your 'thing', it's certainly out there.......you just have to find it.
Thanks, Soulman- 🙏🏻✨ 💫 ✨
💙
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Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
1st Jun 2021 8:32am
Blu
This is very beautiful. I agree. Just in writing what I have written this month I feel the changes that writing has on our existence and on existence, itself, as bold a statement as that might be. I am so inspired by your perspective and I do believe that you have a brilliant, light filled purpose. Truly.
This is very beautiful. I agree. Just in writing what I have written this month I feel the changes that writing has on our existence and on existence, itself, as bold a statement as that might be. I am so inspired by your perspective and I do believe that you have a brilliant, light filled purpose. Truly.
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
Hey there, Cipher ;)
A heartfelt thank you for your kind inspiring words and generous list add. I appreciate it muchly. It's always a pleasure to see you and even more so with such support and warmth :)
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
A heartfelt thank you for your kind inspiring words and generous list add. I appreciate it muchly. It's always a pleasure to see you and even more so with such support and warmth :)
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
1st Jun 2021 9:13am
Insights from your writing: True can be a slap in in the face, baked in a pie you choke on, or given as a nurturing caress. You've chosen the third option and I call you by your hidden name - Gaia
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
I adore your comments, my friend... I'm far far faaar from Gaia, I blush with such a mention... Glad you enjoyed it reading and it am humbly appreciative of all your thoughtfulness.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
1st Jun 2021 1:39pm
Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
2nd Jun 2021 2:26am
Thank youuuuuuu, I appreciate it muchly, my lovely friend. ✨ 💫 ✨
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am so grateful for the list add and all your loveliness too.
🌹-⚔️-💙
xo
B
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am so grateful for the list add and all your loveliness too.
🌹-⚔️-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
1st Jun 2021 5:09pm
Thanks Tim,
I truly appreciate your thoughts.
Your open honesty is rare. Thanks for everything—but for that, especially.
🌹—B
I truly appreciate your thoughts.
Your open honesty is rare. Thanks for everything—but for that, especially.
🌹—B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
1st Jun 2021 7:59pm
Keep it trying to til you get it the way you want it. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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2nd Jun 2021 2:37am
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
3rd Jun 2021 10:02pm
I appreciate your extremely generous comments and the kindness you've show... hardly brilliant... you seem to be of similar motives and understands... I am happy you enjoyed reading, Stan. It's definitely motivational to read the effects...
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
In kindness and all my warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
In kindness and all my warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
2nd Jun 2021 8:12pm
Wonderful assertive write ... love the last line ... resonates ... bravo B ...
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
Thanks for the kind words, the generous list add and your supportiveness LilD. It's very much appreciated - 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
🌹
xo
B
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
3rd Jun 2021 10:09pm
I enjoyed your description, "freedom of release" as it's so very apropos, Rian. I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and the inspiration they plant within my very psyche. It's always a pleasure and extremely valuable to get your perspective; they improve my knowledge base as well as my confidence, which is incredibly helpful...
I am humbled and appreciative!
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I am humbled and appreciative!
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
3rd Jun 2021 6:27am
Your poetry clearly is of the nature to be healing and soul-expanding. Love this contemplation o what writing has done for you and the journey it has taken you on. With poetry like yours, it is clear how poetry can be more than just getting words down on the page but also a form of self-actualization. And you made it happen. It is your own personal way to grow.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
3rd Jun 2021 10:13pm
You certainly understood, 💯 my intent with this piece... and I very much appreciate your kind words, John. Yes, I use writing for many reasons but mostly to grow personally and as a writer.
A close second as a catharsis for my ails...
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading and found something here that you identified with, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xoxo
Susan
A close second as a catharsis for my ails...
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading and found something here that you identified with, my friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xoxo
Susan
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
4th Jun 2021 3:14am
L1 is wrong...
no such thing as failure
in my cold opinion dear BV.
some tribute.
:-)
no such thing as failure
in my cold opinion dear BV.
some tribute.
:-)
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Re: Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
4th Jun 2021 3:51am
Some comments ;)
Thanks so much, cf
Your encouragement means a lot to me, my friend
🌹-B
Thanks so much, cf
Your encouragement means a lot to me, my friend
🌹-B
Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
13th Jul 2021 4:07pm
That closing stanza sums up what many of us are in constant search and trying to achieve.
It's a wonderful piece Blue, truly reflective and enlightening.
It's a wonderful piece Blue, truly reflective and enlightening.
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Re. 200 instances of soulful betterment.
13th Jul 2021 5:21pm
I was sending a sort of shout out to Soul via my NoPoo for that day.... I appreciate you reading, Walter and I'm so very happy you enjoyed it...
🌹 - 💙
B
🌹 - 💙
B