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When Gravity Stops
A body in motion,
Tends to stay in motion.
Keeping the course,
With endless devotion.
To act or to be acted upon,
Only changes trajectory,
Forever separated,
from the place that held you & me.
Tends to stay in motion.
Keeping the course,
With endless devotion.
To act or to be acted upon,
Only changes trajectory,
Forever separated,
from the place that held you & me.
Published 31st May 2021
Author's Note
Incomplete idea.
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31st May 2021 4:48pm
2nd Jun 2021 5:58am
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
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2nd Jun 2021 5:59am
1st Jun 2021 9:13pm
No, no, it's a complete idea, pencil. To me it reads like the motion is what we aspire to without really thinking but the acting upon requires more thought, hence action, really.
2nd Jun 2021 6:05am
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Snaggy.
I think you're right, it does require more thought.
Though, sometimes the motion and direction is unavoidable.
I think you're right, it does require more thought.
Though, sometimes the motion and direction is unavoidable.
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