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Re. Socks and Souls
there is so much talent out there on DUP
These verses are inspired by a slightly random pick of little extracts from 24 hours of DUP.
So thanks and credit for this go to the phrasings of:
Cipher O, DCLXVI_1989, garyd, senid, Taurek, WeesusMadimas,Kaden Malis, prometheus5290, Bonbonshaiser, TrueLover Meganne, My Poetic Diary LilDragonFly, Bmovive, Stanley and KittyfromHell.
These verses are inspired by a slightly random pick of little extracts from 24 hours of DUP.
So thanks and credit for this go to the phrasings of:
Cipher O, DCLXVI_1989, garyd, senid, Taurek, WeesusMadimas,Kaden Malis, prometheus5290, Bonbonshaiser, TrueLover Meganne, My Poetic Diary LilDragonFly, Bmovive, Stanley and KittyfromHell.
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31st May 2021 1:01pm
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31st May 2021 2:57pm
Oh how clever ... I love what you did here ... excellent work Sweet O ...
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31st May 2021 8:20pm
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1st Jun 2021 11:34pm
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4th Jun 2021 5:52am
An expression of the torn shards of a heart after the turnabout of commitment into unrequited love. Sensuality is everything for a woman and to be rebuffed is enough to cause her anguish. Your poem is powerful in every way and a shining example of your passionate writing.
XoXoXo
John
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John
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6th Jul 2021 7:37am
Thank you for your thoughtful analysis - I think you have it about right in terms of intention
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6th Jun 2021 9:52pm
Socks and souls are not the end
They’re but a start for you my friend
Those days gone, new ones to come
Remember where you started from
They’re but a start for you my friend
Those days gone, new ones to come
Remember where you started from
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7th Jun 2021 4:54pm
I will remember and begin
To let your comments sink right in
I'll gather in the words that start
Me writing from depths of my heart
To let your comments sink right in
I'll gather in the words that start
Me writing from depths of my heart
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29th Nov 2021 00:01am
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1st Dec 2021 1:10am