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Can you?
The blanket of time has been removed
exposing the raw and priceless core
of the exquisite
Shallow breaths intensified the heartbeats
racing beneath the surface
leaving the fire momentarily unattended
Glazed eyes beg, while hands reach out
seeking, asking, pleading for more...
exposure is met with glistening peaks
and wet lips
Can you please... please drive your desires
into the grace being kept just for you?
Honey sweet...
All of your thoughts, all of your wants, mostly
every inch of you needs to dive in deep to feel the pounding of my passion against sweet tender flesh...
You see I知 in need of you and your most wanton mind... to feed the everlasting flame you fueled 🔥
exposing the raw and priceless core
of the exquisite
Shallow breaths intensified the heartbeats
racing beneath the surface
leaving the fire momentarily unattended
Glazed eyes beg, while hands reach out
seeking, asking, pleading for more...
exposure is met with glistening peaks
and wet lips
Can you please... please drive your desires
into the grace being kept just for you?
Honey sweet...
All of your thoughts, all of your wants, mostly
every inch of you needs to dive in deep to feel the pounding of my passion against sweet tender flesh...
You see I知 in need of you and your most wanton mind... to feed the everlasting flame you fueled 🔥
Published 26th May 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
26th May 2021 2:23am
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26th May 2021 2:29am
26th May 2021 2:29am
26th May 2021 2:33am
26th May 2021 6:04am
This poem would get my Yes! Especially these verses:
Can you please... please drive your desires
into the grace being kept just for you? [......romantic]
Honey sweet...
All of your thoughts, all of your wants, mostly
every inch of you needs to dive in deep to feel the pounding of my passion against sweet tender flesh...
Can you please... please drive your desires
into the grace being kept just for you? [......romantic]
Honey sweet...
All of your thoughts, all of your wants, mostly
every inch of you needs to dive in deep to feel the pounding of my passion against sweet tender flesh...
26th May 2021 3:58pm
26th May 2021 6:11am
Dear T,
Another sizzler!
🔥🥃🚬💥
Very passionate write with loads of excitement and raw intensity. Makes me feel young again and I always appreciate that! Great piece. H🌷
Another sizzler!
🔥🥃🚬💥
Very passionate write with loads of excitement and raw intensity. Makes me feel young again and I always appreciate that! Great piece. H🌷
26th May 2021 3:59pm
And...you池e to kind. I知 just trying to navigate around my crazy brain lol. I appreciate your support very much. 🙌💗
26th May 2021 8:36am
26th May 2021 4:00pm
26th May 2021 2:21pm
I typically eschew erotica here; however, yours is always tastefully done, Lily. You maintain control while losing it. That's a quality not present in many writers.
I know. I pulled most erotica by closing Lily. I知 trying to feel again. Maybe not the right way of going about it. There痴 so much more to life and relationships then sex. But in saying that I知 trying to jump start my creativity.
Even though you are all supportive and kind I feel lost after three car accidents and two concussions. After the concussions my creativity left the building. I was just thinking over my coffee ☕️ this morning that I should try to write about the beautiful bunny and red cardinal standing next to each other while eating the seeds I put out. My luck I値l turned it into bunny porn lol. I love your energy, honesty and presence 🙌💗
Even though you are all supportive and kind I feel lost after three car accidents and two concussions. After the concussions my creativity left the building. I was just thinking over my coffee ☕️ this morning that I should try to write about the beautiful bunny and red cardinal standing next to each other while eating the seeds I put out. My luck I値l turned it into bunny porn lol. I love your energy, honesty and presence 🙌💗
26th May 2021 5:33pm
Well, you know what they say about rabbits! LOL!
Ironically, I just rescued a baby one from a cat's jaws this morning. The cat was not happy. I think that's the closest he's allowed me to him since he started visiting my soup kitchen.
Please remember that what we think isn't necessarily the truth of the matter. Trust me when I tell you that by reading this, your talent and style are still very much in the building. The concussions on your head have nothing to do with your heart. xo
Ironically, I just rescued a baby one from a cat's jaws this morning. The cat was not happy. I think that's the closest he's allowed me to him since he started visiting my soup kitchen.
Please remember that what we think isn't necessarily the truth of the matter. Trust me when I tell you that by reading this, your talent and style are still very much in the building. The concussions on your head have nothing to do with your heart. xo
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
26th May 2021 4:35pm
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27th May 2021 3:22am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Apr 2022 4:45pm
5th Apr 2022 1:00pm
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5th Apr 2022 7:00pm
Thank you for your wonderful words of support. I appreciate your thoughts and interest 🌟
