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Aeternities
The manipulation
In society
Is a sublimation
Of poison
Poisoning voices
Of spoken
& written
Words
Seeking to break away from the herds
Of black shepherds
Bleak swords
Of double speak metaphors
Under
The surface
Needing to be swept away in tempests
All I desire is the antinomies
Of those
Frightful physiognomies
In those
Hermetic personalities
At those
Dislocated localities
For those
Spiraling swirling Aeternities
Swirling Spiraling Aeternities.
Published 22nd May 2021
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22nd May 2021 7:52am
23rd May 2021 8:07am
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23rd May 2021 8:10am
Yes! I completely agree. A magical alphabet. I think poets & writers create an MA either consciously or unconsciously, but perhaps there is a different kind of power when there is a conscious intent placed into the operation.
[Magia eternal
and so be it, may it be so!!!!!]
:)
[Magia eternal
and so be it, may it be so!!!!!]
:)
22nd May 2021 2:44pm
I love the usage of obsolete spelling here! It adds a historic dimension of ancient text solidifying your meaning. It definitely contributes to the depth of the piece. I felt this a reflection piece on the observation of societal ( not to be confused with true humanity ) tactics wielded for power and control. It's also a reminder of what is beneath, and can be found in the depths of self.
Well done.
Well done.
23rd May 2021 8:13am
That is a great observation and insight, pertaining to the obsolete spelling...
And I very much like the differentiation between society and true humanity. That is an important point to remember and reflect upon.
Thank you for reading, processing, and reflecting back your unique form of light...
And I very much like the differentiation between society and true humanity. That is an important point to remember and reflect upon.
Thank you for reading, processing, and reflecting back your unique form of light...
