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Mysteri_Eyes
I
I see a magical/ tragical/ beautiful room
Where the sun pursues the moon
And expands into seas of reflection
As light pursues shadows in candle lit contemplation
I exist/ at the solitary edges of your words… My attention
I become/ someone enthralled by the curves… My imagination
I am taken/ to another place another space… My impression
I lose myself/ in the contour of your allure… My fascination
Your voice vibrates in the shell of my ear like secrecy
Transforming my silence into revelations I withheld secretly
In graceful waves/ made by self evolved swans/ comprised of skies
That pass across the surface of the mind/ like the shadows in your eyes
II
I am enthralled/ in the ambiance of your presence.
As the world becomes a faceless place/ that pales behind your beautiful face/
Which withholds in rays/ of the mysterious ways/ of an enchanting essence/
Drawing me in/ like ascension/ of the spirit into a Heaven/ or a heavenly place/
The curvature of your lips/ I watch like sunsets/
Into divine nights/ that lead me into lines of foreign lights/
And foreign sights/ that revolve in foreign orbits/
Like wayward kites/ of skyward innocence and benevolent sights/
The more I listen/ the deeper the ardor of the passion/
Which blossoms in my mind/ like lotuses numbering a thousand-thousand/
Transferring into my heart/ in the art/ of submission/
And a worshipful stance/ from which I advance/ to the strangest strangeland/
For how long I have suppressed myself I cannot say/ as my eyes peel away/
Into the deep/ and you make me want to weep/
Take this impression/ and passion/ as a secret to keep/
In your mystical/ magical/ mystifying way/
III
Your eyes...
Have become portals to amethyst skies/
And you have given me wings to fly/
In the amazement derived/ from your amazing ways/
With no trace of because-because there are no questions of why/
We are now face to face/ and I pull you close/ and breathe you in/
The lair of your hair/ comes upon me in ultraviolet clouds/ of clandestine secrecy
Your aura receives me/ because you know I could never deceive thee/
I press my lips upon yours gracefully/ and you gracefully receive me/
After a gateway of eternity/ where I become you and you become me/
I sensually/ place my lips upon the skin of your cherubic cheeks/ heavenly/
Eternity/ and then I free fall freely/ into the nape of your neck breathing heavily
Heavenly/ loving lust/ I just/ want to taste every part of you immediately
And you receive me/ and I respond by removing your garments slowly/ sensually/
Covering your body/ with a plethora of you and me/ that lies on my lips that cannot lie/
Your body is an upside down sky/ with no because-because there is no why/
Your sweet lovely beautiful breasts fall into my mouth in plentiful harvests/ plentifully
So many eternities/ Heaven in shades of heavenly/ lost in the findings of a stirring sea/
I kiss/ each space/ of your body eternally/ just to see a sea/ of reflections of eternity/
Arriving at the your inner thigh/ you sigh/ and I kiss your flesh flush with sensuality/
I cannot lie/ this is the sweetest scent ever sent into my senses/ scented sensuousity/
Into the sweetest taste/ blossoming post haste in every last/ sense/ sensually supreme
In petals/ falling into a sea of you and me/ one mind one heart/ in the art/ of zero time/
Losing myself again in revolutions of repetition to renewal to ultimate form of creation
As stirring seas/ centralize/ into ensuing crescendos/ and windows/ open close/ open/
And we just… Disappear… In perfect trust without fear.
Published 22nd May 2021
Author's Note
Spoken/written words... Erotic is the easiest category to place...:)
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22nd May 2021 6:07am
Windows into the soul
Mirrors reflecting one's fondest desires
Very nice ink
Mirrors reflecting one's fondest desires
Very nice ink
23rd May 2021 7:57am
22nd May 2021 6:14am
Beautiful to have something interesting like this showing up in my feed.
Thank You!
Thank You!
23rd May 2021 7:57am
I liked the audio introduction that wasn’t included in the written down version. That could have been a poem all by itself. It added this level of heart into the art and for me, I felt really added to it. Good, clear reading voice btw.
I’ll be honest, I usually run a clear mile from anything tagged erotica (because most of it... is shit) but this one had a touch of class about it which made it palatable.
Thank you for sharing this intriguing offering.
-M
Ps— I don’t know if you’re a member, but I run the Loudspeaker poetry group here on the DU for working on and sharing audio / video offerings if you’re ever interested. 👌🏻
I’ll be honest, I usually run a clear mile from anything tagged erotica (because most of it... is shit) but this one had a touch of class about it which made it palatable.
Thank you for sharing this intriguing offering.
-M
Ps— I don’t know if you’re a member, but I run the Loudspeaker poetry group here on the DU for working on and sharing audio / video offerings if you’re ever interested. 👌🏻
23rd May 2021 8:02am
I very much like your insights! You are a reliable audience.:)
I am not too big on erotica, myself. I have only recently written a few things in that genre. I appreciate your perspective on the matter and complement.
I entered your Black Hole Sun competition and will certainly look further into Loudspeaker.
Many thanks!
I am not too big on erotica, myself. I have only recently written a few things in that genre. I appreciate your perspective on the matter and complement.
I entered your Black Hole Sun competition and will certainly look further into Loudspeaker.
Many thanks!
22nd May 2021 8:04am
Favourite set of lines:
After a gateway of eternity/ where I become you and you become me/
I sensually/ place my lips upon the skin of your cherubic cheeks/ heavenly/
Eternity/ and then I free fall freely/ into the nape of your neck breathing heavily
Heavenly/ loving lust/ I just/ want to taste every part of you immediately
And you receive me/ and I respond by removing your garments slowly/ sensually/
Covering your body/ with a plethora of you and me/ that lies on my lips that cannot lie
After a gateway of eternity/ where I become you and you become me/
I sensually/ place my lips upon the skin of your cherubic cheeks/ heavenly/
Eternity/ and then I free fall freely/ into the nape of your neck breathing heavily
Heavenly/ loving lust/ I just/ want to taste every part of you immediately
And you receive me/ and I respond by removing your garments slowly/ sensually/
Covering your body/ with a plethora of you and me/ that lies on my lips that cannot lie
23rd May 2021 8:03am
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