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Haircut
today I chopped the last bits
of whoever I used to be
from the ends my hair
greeting the shock of
salt and pepper
with a smile
there you are, at last
of whoever I used to be
from the ends my hair
greeting the shock of
salt and pepper
with a smile
there you are, at last
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Re. Haircut
19th May 2021 5:22am
Dear L,
A gem for sure. Both the poem and the poet found underneath the shorn locks. I find myself betwixt and between feelings of going au naturale and maintaining my “natural” color. Clawing to the last vestiges of youth I wonder how I’ll feel in another ten years. I very much appreciate the discovery of self in a new haircut and seeing wisdom manifest itself in our bodies. Wonderful write. H🌷
A gem for sure. Both the poem and the poet found underneath the shorn locks. I find myself betwixt and between feelings of going au naturale and maintaining my “natural” color. Clawing to the last vestiges of youth I wonder how I’ll feel in another ten years. I very much appreciate the discovery of self in a new haircut and seeing wisdom manifest itself in our bodies. Wonderful write. H🌷
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19th May 2021 4:45pm
Society applies so much pressure to women to stay looking young, it’s as if what we look like for a brief time in our 20’s is the only valid way to exist. I started going gray when I was 18, so the battle for me has been a long and tiresome one lol. If I had known it would feel so absolutely liberating, I’d have done it a long time ago!
Re. Haircut
19th May 2021 8:00am
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19th May 2021 4:46pm
Re. Haircut
19th May 2021 5:53pm
Bravissima, Luna❣ Using a haircut as a metaphor for transition is beautiful. Like a snake sheds its skin. This passage makes me happy because I feel the same way,
"greeting the shock of
salt and pepper
with a smile"
I have earned those spices and wear them like a badge of honor.
Thank you for the deep think🌹🙏
"greeting the shock of
salt and pepper
with a smile"
I have earned those spices and wear them like a badge of honor.
Thank you for the deep think🌹🙏
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22nd May 2021 4:34am
Re. Haircut
19th May 2021 8:39pm
I love love LOVE this as a whole but that last line, Luna!!!... Ohhh, how I live for that line.
It just sums up so many feelings from this last year, so. very. succinctly. 👌🏻 Absolutely beautiful work, lovely lady!... AND....
I bet you look fabulous, too!!! 😉
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
B
It just sums up so many feelings from this last year, so. very. succinctly. 👌🏻 Absolutely beautiful work, lovely lady!... AND....
I bet you look fabulous, too!!! 😉
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
B
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22nd May 2021 4:35am
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22nd May 2021 4:36am
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22nd May 2021 5:08am
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23rd May 2021 1:30am
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22nd May 2021 5:09am
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23rd May 2021 1:18am
You have that Barbershop freshly cut smell to ya. Congrats on embracing the future and the new look.
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23rd May 2021 1:31am
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