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Green Tsunami
Go crazy me up
green Tsunami
Crazy me up
not like before
Crazy me up
green Tsunami
You are my whore
you are my whore
Bad man grind glass
green Tsunami
Spray on your buds
so you weigh more
Money on trees
your green Tsunami
Money on trees
law cut eye my door
Bypass my meter
green Tsunami
Wait till October
for my first draw
Crazy me up
green Tsunami
You are my whore
not like before
Published 22nd Jan 2010
| Edited 28th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2010 9:52am
Weird and seemingly lyrical poem, this resonates inside the mind at a slow and subtle pace, which I reckon is a good thing. Thoughts clearly delineated and language crisp as usual.
22nd Jan 2010 10:33am
Yes, it's a Rasta style song, Brian - which I felt needed to be posted in Drugs rather than Song Lyrics.
22nd Jan 2010 10:35am
Sorry Jack ( and Brian) a temporary moment of name blindness there - a pyramid of apologies to you both.
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2010 10:40am
Great piece, A. "Bombastic" seems to be the word that comes to mind reading this machine-gun verse.
I don't suppose this was at all inspired by that semi-interesting BBC Three (I think) documentary last night?
I don't suppose this was at all inspired by that semi-interesting BBC Three (I think) documentary last night?
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2010 10:45am
this is quirky alright, i love the way it flows, difficult to scratch,intrigung A.
22nd Jan 2010 10:49am
You got it in one Cthonian - the words green Tsunami were still stuck in my brain this morning when I woke up, so I thought them too good to waste.
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2010 11:01am
Some of the techniques to boost the weight of their harvest were somewhat shocking - but this (IMO) is why the government needs to take a longer look at certain laws in this country regarding the criminalisation of some substances.
But back to the poem, very nice flow to it, A. Very good indeed.
But back to the poem, very nice flow to it, A. Very good indeed.
22nd Jan 2010 11:03am
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2010 11:30am
Sickening, in fact. I know of a few people around here who've been victim of infected lungs thanks to dubious products.
22nd Jan 2010 11:35am
22nd Jan 2010 10:53am
Thanks Priya - it actually highlights the serious problem of how dodgy skunk farmers bolster their harvest with dangerous substances to make more money. Truly dirty.
22nd Jan 2010 10:57pm
22nd Jan 2010 11:21pm
Absolutely not - if you read the previous comments here you may find the answer to your question. This is a serious issue. The way I have written this lyric is intended to bring awareness to those who need it most tho.
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