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Sky Fall
Sky Fall
From the sky fall
The zeroed in vision
Gave form to minutia
The electrons or neutrons or neutrinos
Hornets nests unseen
Maybe something like suffering
Sorted sordid supreme
Day over day
Rocks and streams
Every origin has its impetus
As the tear fell onto the grave
Rose upward in pieces
And filtered into chiseled incisions
From the sky fall
The zeroed in vision
Gave form to minutia
The electrons or neutrons or neutrinos
Hornets nests unseen
Maybe something like suffering
Sorted sordid supreme
Day over day
Rocks and streams
Every origin has its impetus
As the tear fell onto the grave
Rose upward in pieces
And filtered into chiseled incisions
Published 9th May 2021
Author's Note
A vision I had once.
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9th May 2021 12:35pm
That final stanza is exquisite in imagery. Literally, water hitting soil would cause chiseled incisions; deltas through the dirt. I garnered a melancholy undercurrent of loss in this one, Chipher_O. Almost a foreboding or prophetic essence to it. Well done.
10th May 2021 7:11am
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