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except for the rain
there was some sun
today
not much
but some
tomorrow there will
be no sun
just rain
rain
rain
and finally
more rain
last chapter
closing
paragraph
final
sentence
concluding
word
everything
ends
story's
end
love
ends
life
ends
except for the
rain
except for the
rain
except
for
the
rain
a miracle
that
anything
survives
at
all
Published 8th May 2021
| Edited 9th May 2021
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8th May 2021 2:01am
Dear BK,
I know. Everything seems endless. The cold crap weather, little to no vacation destinations, this virus.
You’ve been awesome hanging in there but I feel this write. I can’t even be frustrated anymore. I feel like “they’ve” won. I’m out. Game over. Shall we try again tomorrow? One more day? This poem is spot on and much appreciated. H🌷
I know. Everything seems endless. The cold crap weather, little to no vacation destinations, this virus.
You’ve been awesome hanging in there but I feel this write. I can’t even be frustrated anymore. I feel like “they’ve” won. I’m out. Game over. Shall we try again tomorrow? One more day? This poem is spot on and much appreciated. H🌷
8th May 2021 10:11pm
Sadly, everything does end ( sooner or later) and what are we left with?
Thank for the thoughts and kind words.
hugs and luv's,
buddhakitty.
Thank for the thoughts and kind words.
hugs and luv's,
buddhakitty.
8th May 2021 3:55am
Damn, if Honoria didn't just bullseye it exactly. The fucking frustration!!! .... that's what I takeaway. It's my feeling as well. I am at my wits end and in need of finding a way to make it past the feeling of never-ending.
I feel this write, deeply.
Much love and respect, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
I feel this write, deeply.
Much love and respect, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
8th May 2021 10:13pm
The rain falls on the quick and the dead, so let the rain fall on me.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
8th May 2021 6:57am
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 00:50am
8th May 2021 4:35pm
Hope you feel better..
8th May 2021 10:16pm
Thank you, MyLadyCharlotina. I appreciate the kind thoughts.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
3rd Jul 2021 11:13pm
It’s such a different contrast to where I live as there’s hardly any rain.
Although the lines are short, they carry weight and despair, waiting and waiting for the sun to come out.
Although the lines are short, they carry weight and despair, waiting and waiting for the sun to come out.
4th Jul 2021 11:29am
And wait we must, wally. That rain falls into everyone's life.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
